At 1/24/10 01:07 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote:

At 1/24/10 01:03 PM, ironraven24 wrote: That was a great song, how long did it take you to make?

About two and a half hours. 30 minutes to get the basics, and the rest was just fine tuning.

It really shows. Could someone give me a bit of Critique on my latest song?

Here's something I started working on last night and finished it just now. I sort of borrowed the idea from that "Rebirth" song Evil-Dog put on there. It's pretty simple, but I love it.

(Through the Flames We March)-Bdu-cbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-g cD-abI-gbI-gdu-cdg-kbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-g cBcBcBcBcBcBcBcB-abI-gdf-mdf-jdu-cbI-gbI -gbI-gbI-kbI-gbI-gbI-gdf-udu-cbI-mbI-gbI -gbI-gdf-Z-Z-c,-dkL-ckC-ckn-ckC-ckR-ckZ-
kig-cif-alo-akZ-akK-akK-gkv-fkZcS-gkkiNk Oldlo-biYkkiNkOkk-biYkv-rkw-ckv-gmD-cmD-
cmD-cnq-cno-cmD-cmD-cnT-clU-ciu-bkglo-bk gkK-liv-ciu-aif-alo-akZ-giu-aif-akZ-bkK-
kiK-ciJ-ejqiMiu-ejbixkv-khUjcldiyix-chUj cjGiy-bijiiif-gif-aiY-ciJ-dkg-diY-iiJ-ai f-ajC-akZ-giJ-aif-ajC-ajR-akg-gjR-gjn-bj C-aiY-ckg-difiu-blo-aiJ-ekv-Z-C,-BaL-lak -aak-aak-aakak-caL-caK-gax-gak-gak-gaB-a aG-cag-caG-cbg-bbGat-caK-Qdx-bdKcX-bdKax -vdx-ndx-Eam-gae-cak-kdl-cdk-wak-MeX-Z-Z -k,ar-gap-gap-gap-laq-cap-aap-aap-aapap-
gap-gap-gap-gap-ybv-cbu-Qfc-bfveq-bfvaI-
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cfc-afv-gfv-gbN-bcg-bbu-bcS-dap-aaI-aeq-
abb-bap-bdl-Z-C

Here's the first song I made in POM2. I don't really like it and I named it like I was a 5 year old:

(Heavy Licks)bx-gbx-gbx-gbx-gbx-gbx-obx-obx-odf -gdf-adf-adf-adf-abx-gbx-gbx-gbx-gbx-gbx -gcz-cbx-gbx-obx-gbx-gdf-Z-Z-Z-Z-I,-pgP-
ggP-ggP-ggP-ogP-ogP-oap-gap-ggP-ggP-ggP-
ggP-ggP-ggP-gpm-cgP-ggP-ogP-ggP-gap-Z-Z-
Z-Z-I,-Vhg-gaU-caU-ceQ-ceD-caU-caU-cft-g ak-gak-gaU-caU-caU-caU-caU-caU-caU-caU-c aU-caU-caU-caU-gaU-caU-caU-caU-caq-caD-c aU-caU-caU-caU-cak-Z-Z-Z-Z-I,-Fah-cah-ca h-cah-kah-cah-kah-cah-kap-gap-gnt-cns-cn t-cns-cnq-cno-cnt-cns-cnp-cnt-cns-cns-cp m-cah-cah-cah-cah-kah-cah-cah-cah-cap-Z-
Z-Z-Z-I

I think we should also post are character data as well. So here's my band:

Guitarist 1: 0,0,0,3,2,17,2,0,2,8,1,5,0,86,0,11,0,0,4 ,5,0,1,1,63,11,0
Guitarist 2: 0,0,0,2,3,5,3,0,4,1,0,0,0,78,0,0,0,0,1,1 7,0,3,2,50,91,18
Bassist: 0,0,0,6,0,14,0,0,3,5,1,1,0,0,0,0,0,0,3,3 ,0,3,1,0,0,1
Drummer: 0,0,0,8,0,2,0,0,0,11,0,6,37,1,3,3,3,3,0,
0,2,3,1,0,0,0

At 1/24/10 11:10 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote: I think we should also post are character data as well. So here's my band:

Guitarist 1: 0,0,0,3,2,17,2,0,2,8,1,5,0,86,0,11,0,0,4 ,5,0,1,1,63,11,0
Guitarist 2: 0,0,0,2,3,5,3,0,4,1,0,0,0,78,0,0,0,0,1,1 7,0,3,2,50,91,18
Bassist: 0,0,0,6,0,14,0,0,3,5,1,1,0,0,0,0,0,0,3,3 ,0,3,1,0,0,1
Drummer: 0,0,0,8,0,2,0,0,0,11,0,6,37,1,3,3,3,3,0,
0,2,3,1,0,0,0

Eventually, I haven't customized to my liking yet. What difficulty do you guys play on? Do you play at all, or just compose? I can only play on easy so far.

If it matters, I can play both Rock band and Guitar hero on expert :P

At 1/25/10 04:04 PM, ironraven24 wrote:

At 1/24/10 11:10 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote: I think we should also post are character data as well. So here's my band:

Guitarist 1: 0,0,0,3,2,17,2,0,2,8,1,5,0,86,0,11,0,0,4 ,5,0,1,1,63,11,0
Guitarist 2: 0,0,0,2,3,5,3,0,4,1,0,0,0,78,0,0,0,0,1,1 7,0,3,2,50,91,18
Bassist: 0,0,0,6,0,14,0,0,3,5,1,1,0,0,0,0,0,0,3,3 ,0,3,1,0,0,1
Drummer: 0,0,0,8,0,2,0,0,0,11,0,6,37,1,3,3,3,3,0,
0,2,3,1,0,0,0

Eventually, I haven't customized to my liking yet. What difficulty do you guys play on? Do you play at all, or just compose? I can only play on easy so far.

If it matters, I can play both Rock band and Guitar hero on expert :P

I don't really care about the GH/RB feature of the game, I just like composing music. Though I really wish there was another way to get money in the game, because my current band looks retarded.

At 1/25/10 06:30 PM, Valjylmyr wrote:

At 1/25/10 04:04 PM, ironraven24 wrote:

At 1/24/10 11:10 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote: I think we should also post are character data as well. So here's my band:

Guitarist 1: 0,0,0,3,2,17,2,0,2,8,1,5,0,86,0,11,0,0,4 ,5,0,1,1,63,11,0
Guitarist 2: 0,0,0,2,3,5,3,0,4,1,0,0,0,78,0,0,0,0,1,1 7,0,3,2,50,91,18
Bassist: 0,0,0,6,0,14,0,0,3,5,1,1,0,0,0,0,0,0,3,3 ,0,3,1,0,0,1
Drummer: 0,0,0,8,0,2,0,0,0,11,0,6,37,1,3,3,3,3,0,
0,2,3,1,0,0,0

Eventually, I haven't customized to my liking yet. What difficulty do you guys play on? Do you play at all, or just compose? I can only play on easy so far.

If it matters, I can play both Rock band and Guitar hero on expert :P

I don't really care about the GH/RB feature of the game, I just like composing music. Though I really wish there was another way to get money in the game, because my current band looks retarded.

I think pretty much everybody's band looks retarded unless they were really working with the game part, i still have what it gave me, which sucks because my drummer is all pink >.<

So unless you got lucky not many people have a cool looking band, at least i think...

At 1/25/10 07:01 PM, gamewiz202 wrote: I think pretty much everybody's band looks retarded unless they were really working with the game part, i still have what it gave me, which sucks because my drummer is all pink >.<

So unless you got lucky not many people have a cool looking band, at least i think...

Mine isn't too bad, but it could stand to be a lot better. I just look at these guys and want to punch the drummer.

At 1/25/10 07:01 PM, gamewiz202 wrote: So unless you got lucky not many people have a cool looking band, at least i think...

I think my band is pretty cool looking, but I think they could look a little better :C

My band is okay, they look punk I guess. I'll probably play the game just so I can change their look.

Just started im glad they didnt leave out metal here's mine would prob be better but first song
(Death by awesome)dnbI-cbv-kaq-cbS-gbD-gbT-ccDcE-a dfbP-cbI-gbI-ccz-acD-abC-gbC-gbH-gbH-cca -gca-gca-gck-hbw-gbw-gbw-gbw-gbw-gcz-Z-Z -Z-Z-Z-m,na-ljJ-cnz-coP-coS-coU-goV-coV-
gnL-cnL-cnL-goP-ggP-gog-cog-coi-cni-gnA-
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At 1/24/10 03:35 PM, Valjylmyr wrote: Here's something I started working on last night and finished it just now. I sort of borrowed the idea from that "Rebirth" song Evil-Dog put on there. It's pretty simple, but I love it.

(Through the Flames We March)-Bdu-cbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-g cD-abI-gbI-gdu-cdg-kbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-gbI-g cBcBcBcBcBcBcBcB-abI-gdf-mdf-jdu-cbI-gbI -gbI-gbI-kbI-gbI-gbI-gdf-udu-cbI-mbI-gbI -gbI-gdf-Z-Z-c,-dkL-ckC-ckn-ckC-ckR-ckZ-
kig-cif-alo-akZ-akK-akK-gkv-fkZcS-gkkiNk Oldlo-biYkkiNkOkk-biYkv-rkw-ckv-gmD-cmD-
cmD-cnq-cno-cmD-cmD-cnT-clU-ciu-bkglo-bk gkK-liv-ciu-aif-alo-akZ-giu-aif-akZ-bkK-
kiK-ciJ-ejqiMiu-ejbixkv-khUjcldiyix-chUj cjGiy-bijiiif-gif-aiY-ciJ-dkg-diY-iiJ-ai f-ajC-akZ-giJ-aif-ajC-ajR-akg-gjR-gjn-bj C-aiY-ckg-difiu-blo-aiJ-ekv-Z-C,-BaL-lak -aak-aak-aakak-caL-caK-gax-gak-gak-gaB-a aG-cag-caG-cbg-bbGat-caK-Qdx-bdKcX-bdKax -vdx-ndx-Eam-gae-cak-kdl-cdk-wak-MeX-Z-Z -k,ar-gap-gap-gap-laq-cap-aap-aap-aapap-
gap-gap-gap-gap-ybv-cbu-Qfc-bfveq-bfvaI-
qjn-aiYeq-adX-hjn-aiYdX-bdE-ofv-gfc-ejci ydl-weK-ceJ-geJ-ceq-cdX-geJ-keJ-cdX-ieJ-
cfc-afv-gfv-gbN-bcg-bbu-bcS-dap-aaI-aeq-
abb-bap-bdl-Z-C

I actually really liked this espcially those back and fourths where one guitar did a quick strum and the next on followed but my main problem is pretty much through all 4 mins you kept the drummer playing the same beat and sometimes it didnt match with what was being played but when he did something other than that it sounded good too soooo

8.5/10

2nd song i made in about 15 20 mins before i went to bed its short about 1 min see if you can spot the pattern

(Steadily Rising)dwdwdwdw-hci-gci-obe-cbe-cbe-gbz-
gbz-odf-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-dpn-glw-clB-cly-c lz-koN-coJ-coT-gpe-cpj-coX-coZ-cpm-Z-Z-Z -Z-Z-Z-Z-g,-Bhi-sfQ-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-A,-hpm -caN-caN-caN-caN-kbg-cbg-cbg-ghz-ghz-kpn -Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-c

and sorry for the triple post i just have school in the mourning and would forget to post this song tommorow

This game is stifling. I'm really not into the style of music that I think Evil-Dog was intending us to make when he picked these riffs. I've been trying to make riffs with the Fast and Heavy Fast drum beats, but everything that goes with it sounds like something I'd hear on the radio (which I hate, fyi). I have to use a lot of melodies, which are nice in moderation, but using them as the song's only aspect is... limiting.

At 1/26/10 08:35 PM, Valjylmyr wrote: This game is stifling. I'm really not into the style of music that I think Evil-Dog was intending us to make when he picked these riffs. I've been trying to make riffs with the Fast and Heavy Fast drum beats, but everything that goes with it sounds like something I'd hear on the radio (which I hate, fyi). I have to use a lot of melodies, which are nice in moderation, but using them as the song's only aspect is... limiting.

well i posted my song i tried to make it fast paced but it is limited maybe hell make a metal o matic?
See if you like my song cause the drums can be sorta fast paced just the lack of metal guitar and distortion makes the songs not that heavy

Here's a new song I'm working on, Fighting for Glory:

(Fighting For Glory)cQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ -ccz-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-M,-Bah-cah-can-Z-Z-Z-
Z-Z-Z-Z-M,-Faf-caj-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-M,-hag-
can-cag-can-cag-cag-cag-can-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-
Z-M

That's all I got so far, so what do you guys think?

I like it although id guess youre barely done that seemed like just a big intro but good so far

Been working on this one today actually a story to this one basically the guitarist are arguing who is better so they have a battle and the bassist comes in and tries to break it up and in the end they realize they sound 2 times better playing together

(The Fight)-hbM-gbP-gbP-gcX-ddf-abv-gbv-gcC-a cY-ccY-ccY-ccY-jbB-gbB-gbB-gbD-gbD-gbD-g dfcJcHcC-acz-bcE-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Q,gY-gnS-gnV-
gnK-nnB-gnE-ypm-bpt-klI-clJ-oom-cop-coo-
cnX-coH-cap-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-Fgd-cfQ!!-sfX-g fV-LgA-wak-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-lha-gnW-ggS-ngL-
ggN-igq-ggw-jlE-olK-clL-gom-cop-coo-cnX-
coH-cap-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y

At 1/26/10 10:15 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote: Here's a new song I'm working on, Fighting for Glory:

(Fighting For Glory)cQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ-ccQ -ccz-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-M,-Bah-cah-can-Z-Z-Z-
Z-Z-Z-Z-M,-Faf-caj-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-M,-hag-
can-cag-can-cag-cag-cag-can-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-
Z-M

That's all I got so far, so what do you guys think?

I would make the drum intro a bit shorter.

well i have 3 up for review by anyone although my friends say the 1st and 3rd are best

At 1/26/10 11:02 PM, conkerman wrote: (The Fight)-hbM-gbP-gbP-gcX-ddf-abv-gbv-gcC-a cY-ccY-ccY-ccY-jbB-gbB-gbB-gbD-gbD-gbD-g dfcJcHcC-acz-bcE-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Q,gY-gnS-gnV-
gnK-nnB-gnE-ypm-bpt-klI-clJ-oom-cop-coo-
cnX-coH-cap-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-Fgd-cfQ!!-sfX-g fV-LgA-wak-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-lha-gnW-ggS-ngL-
ggN-igq-ggw-jlE-olK-clL-gom-cop-coo-cnX-
coH-cap-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y

Its alright. I'd give it a 7/10. My suggestion would be that on the alternating riffs, I would put a riff there for rhythem instead of not having anything there, but that's just me :P

Here is my songs. It's impossible not to love them.

(Razors and Coke)-dbt-gbt-gbt-gbt-gbt-gbt-kcJ-adf-ab t-gbt-gbt-gbt-gbM-gbM-gbM-gcC-adsds-Z-Z-
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(Shove It!)cD-abw-gbw-obt-gbt-gbt-gbt-gbt-mbT-g bT-gbT-gbT-kbw-gbw-hdt-idq-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-R,-
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(Cast Into Oblivion)cS-ccK-ccK-ccz-cdt-kdu-cbO-gbX-
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acD-acx-ccn-cdf-acI-aae-gak-cbv-ccH-acJ-
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Is it just me or am I the only one who liked the original better?

At 1/27/10 04:40 PM, shabbo wrote: Is it just me or am I the only one who liked the original better?

I think its just you, i have no idea why you would prefer the first.

At 1/27/10 07:24 AM, HighWayStar365 wrote:

At 1/26/10 11:02 PM, conkerman wrote: (The Fight)-hbM-gbP-gbP-gcX-ddf-abv-gbv-gcC-a cY-ccY-ccY-ccY-jbB-gbB-gbB-gbD-gbD-gbD-g dfcJcHcC-acz-bcE-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Q,gY-gnS-gnV-
gnK-nnB-gnE-ypm-bpt-klI-clJ-oom-cop-coo-
cnX-coH-cap-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-Fgd-cfQ!!-sfX-g fV-LgA-wak-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y,-lha-gnW-ggS-ngL-
ggN-igq-ggw-jlE-olK-clL-gom-cop-coo-cnX-
coH-cap-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Y

Its alright. I'd give it a 7/10. My suggestion would be that on the alternating riffs, I would put a riff there for rhythem instead of not having anything there, but that's just me :P

I just try not to dilute the sound of the guitars but i went ahead and did what you said so better?

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At 1/27/10 07:08 PM, conkerman wrote: I just try not to dilute the sound of the guitars but i went ahead and did what you said so better?

Definatly better. I'd give it a 9.5/10 Its not perfect, put its really fucking close :P

I also added some bass to give it a little more depth. See if you like that.
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At 1/27/10 07:23 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote:

At 1/27/10 07:08 PM, conkerman wrote: I just try not to dilute the sound of the guitars but i went ahead and did what you said so better?

Definatly better. I'd give it a 9.5/10 Its not perfect, put its really fucking close :P

I also added some bass to give it a little more depth. See if you like that.
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Yea i like it with the bass now i think its about good where it is now do you think i should do the same with this song? Its my first

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At 1/27/10 07:33 PM, conkerman wrote: Yea i like it with the bass now i think its about good where it is now do you think i should do the same with this song? Its my first

Its good. I would put in some bass, but not a whole lot.

At 1/27/10 07:46 PM, HighWayStar365 wrote:

At 1/27/10 07:33 PM, conkerman wrote: Yea i like it with the bass now i think its about good where it is now do you think i should do the same with this song? Its my first

Its good. I would put in some bass, but not a whole lot.

Minor changes but basically more bass in places where i thought it was needed tried to keep it subtle though

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That was... well, it didn't seem very structured. It sounded like you just jumped around with the riffs. 6/10, I'd say.

well most of the structured ones to me suck cause they are boring but thats about as structured as mine are going to get