At 7/18/10 06:16 PM, Soapbubble wrote: Wow, Malta. I'm envious. All we get in stupid Norway is wind and rain. And some sun.

I get tired of the sun over here :P. I mean, it never snows. How boring is that? O.o. But still, I suppose I can't complain about sunny days :D.

It's 12.17 AM here.

1:00 AM here now, so we must be in the same timezone.

At 7/18/10 06:36 PM, TheNewYorkTimes wrote: Hello. I would like to join this club and offer my fair and honest views to the growing flash community and their animations.

Hm... your reviews are alright, but they seem a little rushed to me. You say stuff like 'the animation, while below par, was still entertaining enough to keep my attention.' and then quickly skip to "The sound effects used were a good choice" without mentioning why or where in the flash was the animation below par.

Try and elaborate more on the points you make about a submission, and make your review a bit more detailed, split into paragraphs, etc...

Taken from Fro's guide to writing helpful reviews, I think you should split your reviews into different sections: Animation/Graphics, Concept/Storyline/Gameplay (if it's a game) and Audio. Give each section a little bit of detail, giving your criticism and opinions on each topic and saying what can be improved and how to improve it. Stuff like this could easily make your reviews more detailed and helpful.

You could even go with a simple structure of saying what you liked about a submission in one paragraph, what you disliked in another and how to improve the submission in another. Or you could just invent a good structure yourself or something. My point is, try and give your reviews a bit more detail.

You're free to review the requests of the latest requests list and posting your points when you feel that you've reviewed enough requests for the week to be officially added to the club, but try and give a bit more detail in your reviews :).

At 7/18/10 06:53 PM, Soapbubble wrote:

Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 54

Seriously though, is that a record?

Nope xP.

Although things will be much easier now with the 3 Audio Requests per month rule and going back to weekly updates.

Sigs Forgotten: 2

I know I've forgotten at least one. Guessing both of these were mine.

Nah, you only forgot one. Anwar forgot the other :3.

At 7/18/10 07:00 PM, Supersteph54 wrote:

At 7/18/10 06:16 PM, Soapbubble wrote: Wow, Malta. I'm envious. All we get in stupid Norway is wind and rain. And some sun.

I get tired of the sun over here :P. I mean, it never snows. How boring is that? O.o. But still, I suppose I can't complain about sunny days :D.

Well, snow is nice, it is, but most of the time we get a combination of snow and rain, or just snow that melts away after a day. Gotta drive for a few hours to get to the good snow. And we barely ever get sun at all. Today was considered a good day, with loads of wind, and some rain during the day. And a bit cloudy. That's nice weather.

It's 12.17 AM here.

1:00 AM here now, so we must be in the same timezone.

I guess. Norway is in GMT+1, I think.

At 7/18/10 06:53 PM, Soapbubble wrote:

Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 54

Seriously though, is that a record?

Nope xP.

Although things will be much easier now with the 3 Audio Requests per month rule and going back to weekly updates.

Jesus christ, that's insane. We weren't too far off, though!

Sigs Forgotten: 2

I know I've forgotten at least one. Guessing both of these were mine.

Nah, you only forgot one. Anwar forgot the other :3.

Let's see if I can bring my number down to 0 this week.

Steph you have really been making a lot of updated versions of the rules.Do you keep changing it up a little or are you justkeep reposting it so all the members make sure to see it

At 7/18/10 07:00 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Hm... your reviews are alright, but they seem a little rushed to me.

Hows my review for this one? I put alot more effort into it like you suggested.

• Unpublished Submission

At 7/18/10 07:44 PM, Domo wrote: Steph you have really been making a lot of updated versions of the rules.Do you keep changing it up a little or are you justkeep reposting it so all the members make sure to see it

Steph's just making sure it's on the top of every page, so that requesters and reviewers alike will stay up-to-date on it.

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: 7 ) 1385 | 0225 / 0301 | 74.75% || 129 | 21 / 54 | 038.89% | sixflab

I really meant to do more than one audio review but I was sucked into the forums and new medal games. I'll make sure to allot more time to reviewing.

*All Requests Completed:
Soapbubble

Nice job. Keep up the good work.

At 7/18/10 06:53 PM, Soapbubble wrote: Welcome, newbie! =3

Nothing like a warm welcome, is there? :)

Congrats Soapbubble. How on earth do you manage to review every single request in detail? Every time I review a spam flash and give it a 0 without writing a helpful review (it doesn't deserve one, you know), it gets removed. I can't see how I can write a helpful review to a spam flash...

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  ReBirth (Bugg Mix)

  by BuggMusic

  A euphoric, ascending House song.

  Song

  House

  3,063 Views

  PLAY

Please Rate and Review! Thank you!

At 7/18/10 08:37 PM, TheNewYorkTimes wrote: Hows my review for this one? I put alot more effort into it like you suggested.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/54 2081

Yep, that's much better, keep up those reviews and you'll make a fine member ^^.

Don't forget to post your points and if you have any questions which aren't covered in the club info just PM one of the members or ask in the thread (don't PM me though, I'll be abroad).

Good luck reviewing!

At 7/18/10 11:46 PM, sixflab wrote:

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: *All Requests Completed:
Soapbubble

Nice job. Keep up the good work.

Thanks!

At 7/19/10 03:03 AM, mrty wrote:

At 7/18/10 06:53 PM, Soapbubble wrote: Welcome, newbie! =3

Nothing like a warm welcome, is there? :)

Congrats Soapbubble. How on earth do you manage to review every single request in detail? Every time I review a spam flash and give it a 0 without writing a helpful review (it doesn't deserve one, you know), it gets removed. I can't see how I can write a helpful review to a spam flash...

Discipline, brotha!
Nah, I just had some time off. Can't go out at night because of work, so I'm stuck at home with nothing to do except for Newgrounds and MW2. Writing helpful on spam flashes isn't easy, but you don't have to be very detailed when it comes to them. Just make sure you don't write osmething that can be flagged as abusive.

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Gah, looks like I took longer than expected... Oh well, at least it's finally done.

Damn, I missed a chance to get all of the Flash reviews done... Never mind, I'll head back and finish what I started, before moving onto this list.

[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
1 ) 6445 | 1007 / 1248 | 80.69% || 069 | 11 / 54 | 020.37% | Haggard
2 ) 6397 | 1000 / 1247 | 80.19% || 099 | 16 / 54 | 029.63% | Coop83

Well, I've really blitzed a load of reviews over these past few days, so with a rocket up my arse, I'll head out there and make some more count!

Thanks for the update.

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: 13 ) 073 | 0010 / 0213 | 04.69% || 009 | 01 / 54 | 001.85% | CheppZanoff

AHHH! I knew I was forgetting something yesterday! With all of this excitement on my b-day yesterday I forgot to rifle out the rest of those reviews before the update came about. Well since I won't have another b-day for 364 days, I'll have to step my game up a bit. ;)

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Member's Update #47

Thanks for the update!

[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
1 ) 6445 | 1007 / 1248 | 80.69% || 069 | 11 / 54 | 020.37% | Haggard
2 ) 6397 | 1000 / 1247 | 80.19% || 099 | 16 / 54 | 029.63% | Coop83

Both Coop and me now have completed 1,000 Reviews for this club (plus the one we already completed for the old club). Amazing. I was hoping to review some flashes as well, but it's way too hot here lately (30°C and more) so it's hard to focus on reviewing when your brain is just melting away.

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: 12 ) 098 | 0015 / 0134 | 11.19% || 045 | 07 / 54 | 012.96% | Domo
13 ) 073 | 0010 / 0213 | 04.69% || 009 | 01 / 54 | 001.85% | CheppZanoff
14 ) 059 | 0009 / 0133 | 06.77% || 003 | 00 / 54 | 000.00% | Spysociety *
15 ) 039 | 0006 / 0054 | 11.11% || 039 | 06 / 54 | 011.11% | mrty NEW!

Sweeet ahead of 3 people to get ahead of the person in front of me will take some dedication.
Congrats to the new user

At 7/19/10 09:35 AM, CheppZanoff wrote:

At 7/18/10 06:37 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: 13 ) 073 | 0010 / 0213 | 04.69% || 009 | 01 / 54 | 001.85% | CheppZanoff

AHHH! I knew I was forgetting something yesterday! With all of this excitement on my b-day yesterday I forgot to rifle out the rest of those reviews before the update came about. Well since I won't have another b-day for 364 days, I'll have to step my game up a bit. ;)

Well, hey, belated congratulations to you, sire! Hope you had a good one man! Can't expect someone to review on their birthday, can we?

Jeez, you guys are so overloaded with requests lately that I feel like a criminal every time I come back to visit XD

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  Renegade Space Station

  by Birdinator99

  Wormholes are scary, no?

  Song

  Miscellaneous

  2,153 Views

  PLAY

Lock me up :D

Thanks to all these hard working people!

I'll be going abroad pretty soon, so remember not to PM me if you have any difficulties but just post the questions in the thread or PM any other regular member.

Good luck to Animith for the updating and good luck to everyone for the reviewing :D.

I'll be back the 23rd of August :3.

Hey Everybody!!! I`am so happy to have something finished to present to the world!! Life is flying by so fast and to find time to work on my music is very hard, but atlast I have soemthing I worked so, so hard at and am so proud of and it is with great pleasure that I present to you my new song, Enjoy

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  by <deleted>

  18 Views

At 7/20/10 02:36 AM, sicjes wrote: Hey Everybody!!! I`am so happy to have something finished to present to the world!! Life is flying by so fast and to find time to work on my music is very hard, but atlast I have soemthing I worked so, so hard at and am so proud of and it is with great pleasure that I present to you my new song, Enjoy
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/3 49139

That Link doesnt work, Sorry, here is the good link. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/3 49149

At 7/19/10 10:17 PM, Birdinator99 wrote: Jeez, you guys are so overloaded with requests lately that I feel like a criminal every time I come back to visit XD
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/3 47396
Lock me up :D

Thanks to all these hard working people!

It really isn't that bad. We're a couple of reviewers now so all requests will get one review each. I've already done all flash and art, so I've got the 19 audio reviews left, and that shouldn't be a problem.

Thanks :)

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  All I Want - High

  by Monkeydelic

  All I Want - High - Psychedelic Pussycat Club Nr. 2

  Song

  Blues

  1,275 Views

  PLAY

At 7/20/10 02:05 AM, Supersteph54 wrote: I'll be going abroad pretty soon, so remember not to PM me if you have any difficulties but just post the questions in the thread or PM any other regular member.

Good luck to Animith for the updating and good luck to everyone for the reviewing :D.

I'll be back the 23rd of August :3.

Have A LOT of fun, brah. See you in August! We'll keep the club going.

can you review these?

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/up-a-
notch/john-lennon
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/up-a-
notch/fatty-mcgee

At 7/20/10 01:37 AM, Alaska wrote: If you good kids want to review this
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/54 2742
I would be mighty happy.

Just to note, I reviewed this prior to his request.

At 7/20/10 07:02 AM, Soapbubble wrote:

It really isn't that bad. We're a couple of reviewers now so all requests will get one review each. I've already done all flash and art, so I've got the 19 audio reviews left, and that shouldn't be a problem.

I feel a little better lol

THANKS A LOT GUYS!!!
Could you review these please??? if that's not a problem...
.-Sea in a Coconut
.-Alone
.-Long Legs

Thanks again, your reviews are actually helpfull.

hey, guys. If you wouldn't mind giving me some feedback on my latest song. Currently I have my demo released here. Please can you help me out

The name of the song is acidic

I would appreciate it a lot

Wayne Rayner

I am cold...

Anyway I should get a chance to do a couple more reviews than normal this week.

They're taking my xbox away from me tomorrow. :(

Wont get it back in three weeks. Needs to get repaired. Guess what I'll be doing instead!

At 7/21/10 03:09 PM, Soapbubble wrote: Wont get it back in three weeks. Needs to get repaired. Guess what I'll be doing instead!

Gee wizz, let me think... Writing reviews maybe?