I make moosic ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
This is my Podcast it is not the best but I just want to get some feedback
can you rate this i need 1 vote
I make moosic ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Hi
I'd like to get some feedbacks about the "feeling" of the track
It's the first work made only with midi
I'm not really setisfied with it but I felt really myself very good during the make of it :P
I also need one vote
Bad english, sorry.
Árvíztűrő tükörfúrógép
I make moosic ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Hey guys finally im back, after a 3 year gap and stuff, anyways im sending in new tracks in a bit.
YOLO WORLD!!!
Mori is like an oldschool run n' gun arcade game, both in difficulty and style
Would love any kind of feedback, either constructive or supportive. Just looking to get more people to play it and enjoy it, and it would be nice to pass judgment.
I eat, I draw, I sleep.
I make moosic ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Can you guys maybe give me some insight as to why I have 2 stars, I have no idea what to improve besides line art and colors but I didn't think Newgrounds was that strict about those two things
It would really help a ton if I could just understand why
At 11/18/21 12:03 PM, Cyro-NG wrote:Can you guys maybe give me some insight as to why I have 2 stars, I have no idea what to improve besides line art and colors but I didn't think Newgrounds was that strict about those two things
It would really help a ton if I could just understand why
This is the animation
Your animation seems good but you got to remember you are being judged alongside fully written, voice acted, and finished animated videos. 2 stars for a few seconds of unfinished line-art would be what I would expect. Add in some sound effects and visual effects and you'd probably get another star, if it was a longer fight sequence you might make it to 4+, especially with some lines and decent voice acting.
If it's one thing I have learned about NG it's that while there is a great creator presence on the site there are a lot of regular people coming to be entertained, they typically don't like unfinished stuff, and will not judge content based on it's own merits.
Composing video game soundtracks and the occasional personal release :)
At 11/18/21 06:15 PM, NoStereo wrote:At 11/18/21 12:03 PM, Cyro-NG wrote:Can you guys maybe give me some insight as to why I have 2 stars, I have no idea what to improve besides line art and colors but I didn't think Newgrounds was that strict about those two things
It would really help a ton if I could just understand why
This is the animation
Your animation seems good but you got to remember you are being judged alongside fully written, voice acted, and finished animated videos. 2 stars for a few seconds of unfinished line-art would be what I would expect. Add in some sound effects and visual effects and you'd probably get another star, if it was a longer fight sequence you might make it to 4+, especially with some lines and decent voice acting.
If it's one thing I have learned about NG it's that while there is a great creator presence on the site there are a lot of regular people coming to be entertained, they typically don't like unfinished stuff, and will not judge content based on it's own merits.
Thanks so much for responding man, seems like Newgrounds requires months of not eating to get a 5 star rating lol
Seriously though thanks for giving me some insight into how this stuff works and seems like Newgrounds is really strict about clean lines and color
At 11/18/21 07:05 PM, Cyro-NG wrote:
Thanks so much for responding man, seems like Newgrounds requires months of not eating to get a 5 star rating lol
Seriously though thanks for giving me some insight into how this stuff works and seems like Newgrounds is really strict about clean lines and color
You are welcome. Don't stress too much about clean lines and color, I have no doubt that if something is entertaining despite looking rough it could score highly. In fact I really think you could go far using the visual style in your animation as an intentional artistic choice.
Here's a sanity tip though, don't make getting 5 stars your goal. 5 stars is unobtanium if you are reaching a large audience, because you can't please everyone. In my experience, between 4 and 4.5 is a realistic top end, and if you manage to get beyond that you'll know you've made something truly special.
Eat your food :)
Newgrounds isn't a competition, it's a place to learn, grow, and share your passion!
Composing video game soundtracks and the occasional personal release :)
Hello, my name is Victor Melin and I'm a voice actor. I recently made this Animation Voice Demo and am curious to know what people think. I edited and mixed the demo as well. Honestly, any feedback and/or criticism is appreciated. Maybe you'll like or maybe you have some advice or criticism about my performance and/or audio mixing. I want to put this out there and maybe help content creators with their projects or games. Thank you for your time.
"If you don't stand up for yourself... everyone will walk all over you." -Donald Trump
Hi,
I've just started to develop games, and here's my first attempt.
It's a simple launcher game, in the style of Burrito Bison and Flight, but with a few twists. I gave myself a strict one month deadline, so its by no means perfect but hopefully it's entertaining. I'd love to know what you make of it!
Hey i wanted to see what i could improve on here ? I know the legs are awful but it feels ;ike its more then that. what could it be?
Looking for some pretty fair critism, and how I could imprve the piece and my artstyle as a whole.
Same thing for this one, but I am curious. Which piece of mine do you guys like more? Feedback would be GREAT.
Also, don't forget to vote!
Thanks,
Me.
Performer of all, completer of none
I make moosic ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Latest fully complete drawing I have done, I tried out some new brushes and was just wondering if this look good or not
and ere the link to my post https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/jam3e/zombie-babe
Hey everyone I would really appreciate some feedback on my new song, What Hop
Any feedback at all, good, bad, idc, would just love to hear any thoughts on it. Thanks!
If anyone what to review this beat and thank you for you'r time on it.
I'd appreciate some reviews on my newest piece, thanks!
PU PI PI PU PI PIII
PU PI PI PU PI PIII
Happy to announce my first 2022 submission! It's not a WIP either!
Usually upload works in progress throughout the year. But sat down live on twitch and pushed this out in a couple of hours. I'd be very grateful for some listens as recent audio comes in thick and fast and tracks usually get overlooked! <3
Hi everyone! I'm a new member of this site, though I've already been producing electronic music for several years. I just uploaded my first original song on here, and would appreciate a review on it: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1110688
i have been making a comic for a few months and want to see if i could get some feed back i know that the 1st few chapters look kinda bad but i think it looks good by the latest chapter
https://www.newgrounds.com/playlists/view/816b9a0866f9faecb825225f9fe7584d
