At 11/8/12 07:56 PM, bassfiddlejones wrote:
Might I join you fine people?
Not to sound like a jerk or anything, but I don't think your reviews go in depth enough. Your game reviews act as a perfect example of this. You only write about one or two sentences in each review not talking much about the content aside from "it's fun". What you have to do is explain why you think a game is fun or at least provide examples of specific parts you find enjoyable and vice versa. It seems that you're more partial to audio reviews judging by the fact that you go more in depth with them, but even some of those are kind of vague. The same principle applies to those as well. Explain why.
My advice to improve your review can be summed up as such:
Firstly, expand your horizons. You do a lot of audio reviews, that's all well and good, but try to become more versatile with your reviews. Review more movies or games, maybe even an art piece. Pretty soon, you'll find a system that works and you'll be able to express your feelings towards things more eloquently.
Secondly, don't be vague. It's never good for anyone when you just say something without any sort of base. Saying something is bad without providing an example or pointing out a specific area for them to improve does nothing besides get people angry. Saying something is good without providing examples doesn't allow any improvement either, it's just fluff.
Try utilizing these tactics and review more things. Practice makes perfect!