it seems like good material for a cartoon
it really should have made it to TV. it seems like a great premise for an action cartoon
Reviews for ""Alloy""
Alloy! Alloy! Alloy! Alloy! Alloy! Alloy!
This is so cool! I really wish the Alloy series had made it to TV! I want an Alloy Action Figure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was alright
It was ok. I think you overdid it with the efffects and spinning (1 mabye 2 time is the limit before it looks weird). The 3Dness is probably the only thing that makes it good.
OK
Good:
-3D modelling was awesome, and I commend you for it.
-The sound was flipping crisp.
-the idea of a 'crazy dope armor suit' is good.
Bad:
-You pan and use the 'Matrix effect' way too much and give me the impression that you're just showing off your gfx rather than do a good TV show.
-The title scene at the end is lame.
-The animation was too 'jerky' and you should have added at least A BIT of transition between moving and still - no, wait. Nothing can be that still.
-Your 'crazy dope armour suit' should have been a 'cybernetic enhancement battle suit' - it sounds better.
-You should have a more original title than The Adventures of A.L.L.O.Y.
-You never explain what Alloy's powers are, you just show him beating people up. Baaad influence.
Why is this not on TV!?
This would have been the best show on TV! Why did they not take this show?! What channel did you show it to? Show it to some other channel and see if they like it.