Artistic Flare.
Well, im not really much of a fan of contempary artwork or animation. But i have to admit that it was a good job on composition, mood,graphics ideas. Etc. U really wanted the mind to act alone on this, nothing spelled out, which is nice to see a change.
To ur previous replies about u having work submitted to festivals. I have been to anim festivals b4, and well, all i can say is yours would fit in with the rest of them. Poetic artistic nonsense.
But carry on what ur doing because i know that it unfortunately sells, and that money can be made. Hopefully everyone on Newgrounds will see ur future anims. Good Job Overall.