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Nice job on the graphics, didn't seem to funny for some reason, and what the hell was with the graph?
Reviews for "Foetus & Graph: History 1"
Pretty good
That was smooooooth. theo nly reason i gave it a 5 is because it didnt really have a plot to it. but other then that it was very good. keep up the good work.
Not so much
It was ok, I just really didn't get it, at all, and you had some hard acts to follow, better luck next time.
This is my review.
Ok i'll get straight to the point on this one. It was too god damn short. When I view a flash I expect it to be long enough to know that I acrually watched something. Shouldn't be something that's shorter than a commercial. If it's short, at least give us a hint on your title that it is. You need to adjust the line thickness a little bit to take up some space. It'll greatly improve the graphics by a bunch. Next, I suggest you put the pictures of both the characters in either the beginning or end of the movie with names underneath them. The music was too...redneckish. Instead of focusing on music, focus on sound effects that will make it seem more like a cartoon rather than some flash. I really didn't find it all that violent. At least make it where he misses and the arrow actually goes through his head. I truly didn't find it funny for some sort of machine trying to shoot an arrow through an apple.
If you really wan't to touch it up. Make it look black in white with fuzziness in it. When I see the word history, I suspect that it has some explanation involved in the storyline. Work on that area a bit and it'll be great.
AGandPJ responds:
I never usually say stuff like this but...
Who the hell are you to tell us what to do? Have you made any flash movies? NO!
Listen up kid, and listen good - the F&G series is very popular, and if you think that we are gonna change this animation to suit your little retarded ass needs, then you take your head and stick it as far up you arse as possible, because thats as far as you'll ever get in your life.
F&G own you, your family, and your friends. bow to them.
Now go play tetris or something and stop telling people how to ruin a perfectly good flash movie.
i didnt understand this...