Like the last person said what the hell is this?
Granted I can't do this, but I wouldn't even want to. If your going to submit something have a point. At least if there was nudity or some extreme violence there would have been an entertainment factor.
Ahem...have a point?
Next time, i suggest you watch the previous entries in the series, and for gods sake READ THE AUTHORS COMMENTS BEFORE YOU WATCH THE MOVIE.
It will save you the embarrasment of writing a stupid review and making yourself look like a complete dumbass.
What the hell is this?
Well care to explain?
great
deviousmind_hkc...almost all of your "reviews" tell the creator of a flash how to make it better...for you. no one (on newgrounds) will bow to your every request(or as you like to say "suggestions")
anyway, i really like your style. the entire thing didn't strike me funny, but a lot of small details did. good job.
This is my review.
Ok i'll get straight to the point on this one. It was too god damn short. When I view a flash I expect it to be long enough to know that I acrually watched something. Shouldn't be something that's shorter than a commercial. If it's short, at least give us a hint on your title that it is. You need to adjust the line thickness a little bit to take up some space. It'll greatly improve the graphics by a bunch. Next, I suggest you put the pictures of both the characters in either the beginning or end of the movie with names underneath them. The music was too...redneckish. Instead of focusing on music, focus on sound effects that will make it seem more like a cartoon rather than some flash. I really didn't find it all that violent. At least make it where he misses and the arrow actually goes through his head. I truly didn't find it funny for some sort of machine trying to shoot an arrow through an apple.
If you really wan't to touch it up. Make it look black in white with fuzziness in it. When I see the word history, I suspect that it has some explanation involved in the storyline. Work on that area a bit and it'll be great.
I never usually say stuff like this but...
Who the hell are you to tell us what to do? Have you made any flash movies? NO!
Listen up kid, and listen good - the F&G series is very popular, and if you think that we are gonna change this animation to suit your little retarded ass needs, then you take your head and stick it as far up you arse as possible, because thats as far as you'll ever get in your life.
F&G own you, your family, and your friends. bow to them.
Now go play tetris or something and stop telling people how to ruin a perfectly good flash movie.
good
Short and sweet. Good choice of music and nice animation. Keep it up. :)