It was awful. You're totally screwing your readers
You failed to mention the so called essential parts of a visual walk. These parts are essential to a beginner. Ever heard of contact, hit, pass? You better fucking have heard of it if you want to teach walking. More advanced people can try and bypass these poses, but not the people reading your tutorial.
Also, it's kind of irresponsible to get beginners to start with straight ahead action for walks like that. If they don't know what a walk is, they definitely don't need to do it with straight ahead action. That'll totally screw up their timing. Your lesson also just gets rid of any sense of the hallowed principle of 'slow in, slow out' and timing. These people's walks that you recklessly taught are going to be evenly spaced frames that are attempting to follow your every frame instead of the essential extreme poses.
You shouldn't teach these people halfway, because it's not very nice to instill new people with half assed versions of essential concepts.
(I rated it all zeroes because these categories don't really apply to anything of a tutorial)