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Reviews for "Tai Die"

Amusing but needs more

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off this does need some {SOUND} and even some music to go with it you dont need to have talking voices but with music it would give it some sounds and adding music is not that hard you can always check the newgrounds forums and theres always helpfull tips on doing this, aswell as putting in a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} wich it needs to stop the {LOOPING} now besides all that you do need to make it longer, with more story, more backround effort and more scenes and a few more {EFFECTS} wouldnt hurt. the little animation you did have in this was pretty entertaining and amusing but with more effort with the suggestions i offered it would get better rating and much more viwings, now i do understand its abit old but still i could see something with this, as it does show some effort in the right direction.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
putting in a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} wich it needs to stop the {LOOPING} now besides all that you do need to make it longer, with more story, more backround effort and more scenes and a few more {EFFECTS} wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
Needs some effort in a number of things, as suggested above.

The author hates Digimon, that's that I got from this. The art was average. Goku looked weird... and Tai was just an image off the internet. Good quality one though. The animation could have been better. No sound either, and everything happened too fast. Overall below average.

Umm...

You have Dragonball Z... I think, the text went by pretty fast. Insulting Digimon because it isn't a real anime. You know DBZ is like.. crappy anime right?

Anyways, you need some work, but first, just slow down the text speed, a lot.

Umm...

O.O??? Erm... Try to clean up your animation and look at my tips o Dragon Ball Stick. It will help. Trust me.

Sorry but it just didn't appeal

First of all this shit went waaaaaay to fast for me to read so maybe if it was slowed down I could enjoy it a bit more. But then that leads to the next point it wasn;t even remotely funny. Even back then there were enough assassin games to keep us busy.

That said I didn't care for it. Sorry.