Pwnage
Great Ending, most videos have crap endings, Excelent choice of music put really put me in the mood, the arm not bleeding was kinda wierd and cutting his own hand off was funny XD
I give you props for this lmao i didnt think i would like it but it passed my expectations
Too good
Aye, it's good. I think you've heard enough good words so, if you don't mind, here's some extra polishing for your future flashes. It was all cool, or near-perfect, until the end:
- the evil guy's final death was too abrupt; a little dialogue would really fit the tone of the drama
- there should be a little more detailed stuff on Auron's accent into Heaven(?); more visual of what he was seeing and a little dialogue
- the narration at the end may have been out of place; like an epic, there should be a scrolling page (with a nice animated background to along with the music) for the epilogue. No offence for your voice, I mean.
- and I really don't think dead people can become alive even after their evil shadow has been lifted. I didn't see holes on Auron's mentor when I saw his little scene.
Mind you, I enjoyed your series and it is quite a feat. I just wanted to give you some things a conventional audience member saw that could create an even greater effect from the series, especially the ending, has on the public.
Astounding job, my man. Make another saga of something while you are still into flash.
Sad to see it end!
That was an awesome ending to an awesome series. You have put in so much work and it has come out so well in the final episodes. Good storyline, AWESOME character design (one thing I must point out is that you kept the level of detail constant, and all the scenes went together perfectly :D) and an excellent way to end the series. Thanks for some wickid flashes!
Nice
It had a great storyline, and specialy in the third episode, the flashback to the beginning i liked, just before attacking the huge zombie. If only you where a producer :) you could make this into a movie i would definetly watch hehe.
About the graphics, i found them to be blocky in the beginning but then as you watch more episodes you begin to like the graphics. Ofcourse you should never be pleased hehe you always try to beter yourself.
Anyways: I'll give it a 9. Job well done looking forward to hearing from you again.
...wow.
So I just spent the past hour or so going through and watching the whole series. (With breaks to get some pie. Mmmm... pie.)
This is probably one of the best flash series that I've seen, and this episode in particular is outstanding. You have some serious talent for animation and music, and damn good artistic vision.
That said, I think that some of the stuff is a bit... lacking, I suppose is the right word. The characters don't feel incredibly original, or too different from some of the characters in other sword and sorcery stories I've read or movies that I've seen. Ditto for a lot of the dialogue. Then again, perhaps I'm just a bit nit-picky, since this seems like it was intended to be primarily an action-based bunch of shorts rather than something more focused on plot. :P
Nonetheless, I frigging love this series. Some of the elements in it were great- such as Auron and Radiel taking on the appearances of their respective gods.
I believe that with some work on the writing, this series could be something beyond amazing, even better than the high quality that it already is.