Reviews for PALADIN episode 5 part 2

[Humbaba]

hmmmm

well, i dont mean to be messed up, you have many strong points, but i feel as though i should critique. well first off, the good, it was pretty lengthy, and the character concepts story and quality were epic. the bad, the movment was good but it felt kinda animatronic, i felt the voice acting needed alot of work, i also felt the ending could have ended in a more epic way, and i dunno it feel like its missing something, but all and all, you are obviously a great artist, and deserve much praise, but i feel that your talent can be improved and pushed even further, so best of luck and may your future project be more awsome then the next :D

[tibia1]

good good

that was really good but i was expecting a bigger battle he barly even used his sword but it was still really good

[Max99999]

It WAS looking good, until....

It really was looking good. Great animation, decent voices, seemingly ok story, and an odd fight to the finish situation. They were fighting, blah blah blah, grim outlook for the hero.

But than what happened? The paladin had that huge battle of getting his ASS handed to him, and than in the course of 3 seconds he kills the enemy. Touched sword, decapitated, end.

I'm sorry, but there's a huge difference between a good ending and a terrible climax, and this was the latter. He gets stabbed in the gut when he's in a child's body and laughs it off, but merely touching the sword? Nope, that's gotta be fatal. He's supposedly stronger than ever and than just gets killed in a split second.

Your ending had no "battle" or climax. Just an asswhooping and than a poor plot device to end it, and I'm afraid I was strongly dissapointed.

Don't get me wrong, your animation in general was not bad. As I said earlier, good animation, good voices, great overall. But please, please, PLEASE, in the future, if you make another animation, have someone else write your ending. My apologies if this seemed rude.

[TwiztidHatchet13]

eh could of been better

yea i have been watching this frome the day you posted the first one but i was let down with the ending i mean come on touching the sword you could of done better but oh well

[mibodega]

Pretty good

I have to see it without the lagging, (is that the word we are going with?) to really be sure so I will take a look at it on UTube, after I watch Beyonce busting her ass on stage yesterday.

Anyways, I think it had it's good moments. What I mean is that I think you where so excited about making the Tougher scenes look god, like the Skeletal Dragon flying around and what not, that in some places you missed some simple movements on the Main Dude there. As a matter of Fact the Evil Wizard was better drawn and animated than the main guy. You have to take a page from Micheal Bay and make you main guy STANDOUT.

I did like the look of some of the shots,, transitions, and backgrounds. I presume you used either photoshop or After Effects.

Overall it was kick ass, nice Audio too, and worth waiting for the next one.