Wonderfully Crafted
The artwork and animation is beautiful, especially considering it was done by a single 16-17 year old. The voice-acting was even pretty decent. I liked the old guy's voice, too, it was interesting. My only qualm with this series is the lackluster plot. The mechanics of the movie were great, but if you can manage to spice up the story a bit and use your creativity, you will no doubt create something truly awesome.
~A
Mostly Good
I really liked it except for the ending, which was kind of lame. It seems highly unlikely to me that he wouldn't know the sword would hurt him if he picked it up, and he would be that helpless just from having his hand hurt. Also, it's still kind of hard to hear what they're saying a lot of the time. Other than those few issues, it was magnificent. The music was fantastic, the fights were good, and of course your drawing skills are as sharp as ever. Good job.
awesome! but...
excellent quality in animation, style, and flow. this is a visually beautiful piece of work...
...but the ending is so abrupt and unexplained that it kinda screws the whole thing up for me.
it feels like you worked really hard on this, right up until the climax...and then got kinda lazy and/or tired, and said "lets just end this now." Just a little extra dialog explaining why the sword blew his arm off would be great.
Legendary Series...who cares if it's cliche?
I personally don't give Radiel's behind that the plot is overused. This freakin rocked. Great graphics. Great voices. But I do have to agree with "hardluckart"(below me) about the ending. It was a bit too sudden and quick that you looked like you got a little too impatient and just wanted to end it all now. Other than that, all of your work paid off. Please make another legend like this!
Meh not enough pew pew.
The flash was definetly good quality and you did a great job with the audio and graphics but it was kind of a let down of an ending (it seemed you were building up to something huge for quite a while). The final showdown was basically just the Paladin have a nice long chat with the evil overlord. When the credits rolled I realized the series was over and I just could not believe it. The actual fighting was very limited. There was absolutely no "showdown" of any kind. Yes it is nice that you were developing a hatred between the paladin and the overlord but you have to maked something happen in the end. I honestly believed that the ending of this submission would end differently and that you would continue to develop the paladin's story. Also in the last episode you made a huge deal out of the crow and father's death but these two characters had near to none development in the previous submissions. In conclusion, I did not like the plot very much but I still gave you a "five" because the plot was nto too bad anyway and everything else was near perfection (also you spent so much time on this it would just be cruel to not give you a five).
This Should Have Weekly First Place -L1ght-Speed-