One word and that word is clichie
Hello there. As a very great fan of the macabre and fantasy, the idea of your flash animation did hold some appeal to me. However, as your story was shown, it became more and more apparant, that it had been done many times before and was greatly lacking in original thought. The concept of the paladin (white) and the necromancer (black) was stereotypical of the fantasy ideology and could have been used far better than what you have done here. You must come to understand that the world in which we live is not simply black and white and thus hereos and villians shown in this manner loose all credability. Such representation of good vs evil, as you have shown us here, only acts to reenforce social stereotypes and do little to thrust the viewer beyond the common mold of perception. At this point, i would like to go on to say, my name is Michael and should you ever wish to contact me, you can do so through my profile. I am a author of fantasy and my first publication is due out at the end of the year. Thus, i offer to you my services. Should you ever wish for a backing stroy or even a more profound diolouge, please, contact me and i am sure together, we can come up with something which will appeal to a far greater audiance than the one you have touched.