nice ending for Jerry
all this actually reflects the average life of a person. since people could relate to it, i feel it deserves a good rating. it was repetitive and kept the viewer waiting for a change and, due to that anticipation, it gave a comedic build-up which will give the audience a laugh much like in your other flash, Maxwell's silver hammer.
I particularly like the part where Jerry's 2nd Gf comes with a baby and you gave hints it wasn't his. I say the moral of this flash is an ancient saying which i shall repeat;
LIFE SUCKS!