I liked it...
...but Matzerath already did this cartoon. Granted, the quality of yours surpasses his by leagues, but it told the same story via the same means.
(Title: Mr. Twitcho, Author: Matzerath, NG submission #186739)
Of course that doesn't make this submission any less great, but it was kind of predictable as this has been done before.
Nevertheless, fantastic work as usual!
-Swain
Mixed feelings
This film was directed pretty professionally. It's a good thing to watch once. As other people have said, it did a good job of summarizing someone's typical daily life. The repetition means that it is a lot harder to enjoy the second time around, which will likely mean that its score will drop over time. I didn't find the ending particularly funny. On the contrary, it was a pretty grim scene followed by a mildly funny unexpected scene. Not enough to make the whole thing amusing.
My main reaction was surprise; surprise that you had all of that lead-up and then ended it so quickly. I also objected to you treating the end as a joke, and not sparing a moment to say something (even a small thing) about the family. The comedic tone just didn't seem appropriate. Perhaps it would have worked better if you had not made me actually care about Jerry. As it was, all of that build-up made me care about what happened to him and the ending seemed in bad taste.
The graphics were alright. They were quite rushed, but at least they were consistently average.
The sound was a bright point, especially how it began to seem like some kind of electronic song in one section.
And that is my (very short and inadequate) review.
good idea
its cool how you showed the life of a lonely man and what his actions may result in... good job!
LOOOL
it wus fun but...gross parts >> bad end and why didnt he hidden his wallet sumwhre else...stupid dude XD anyway i bet it wus hard to make so gratz
lol
if u payed a bit attention, u should have noticed the moral of the story
CONDOMS AREN'T SAFE!