funny
Would have been funny if te rope broke and became a part of the everyday thing, but i guess you had to end it.
Reviews for "Jerry"
I hope I don't end up like this.
This flash paints a vivid picture of many peoples lives. Execpt for the hanging part, but some probably did that also.
On to the review.
Clean, smooth, nice graphics. nothing spectactular though. But they didnt need to be.
The style was very simple, and i liked it a lot,as it seems many other people did also. I see you followed the KISS method.
The sound fit good everywhere, execpt when he had sex? was that supposed to be the bed squeaking? other than that, good quality sounds, they fit perfectly throughout the flash.
The only violence i remember in the flash is when hes in hell buring alive. i gave you a 3 for that.
On most long flashes, i recommend they had scene selections if they don't have it, but you can't really do it on this one, so interactivity is fine.
I found it (kind of) humurous on some parts, but i found even more entertaining. I wasn't laughing as much as i was concentrating on jerrys life and thinking about what would happen next.
Overall - great flash, cant think of anything you could improve execpt the sex sounds (LOL). This deserves top 50 for sure, but not at its current spot of #1, just my opinion.
4/5
Better than I expected, but...
Well, damn. I have to say that, at the beginning, I wasn't expecting much. I've seen plenty of TV shows, movies, and animations that use the exact same format: average Joe (or Jerry, I suppose) with an empty life goes through the exact same thing every day until he's driven to madness. I've seen plenty that use the same damn format, too. Alarm, breakfast, work, etc.; its all been done before. Even the ending was incredibly predictable.
Still, despite the lack of originality, I was laughing pretty hard. The biggest advantage was the body language and the facial expressions. The guy is just goofy (and as a result, kinda likable), and that carried over into every scene. He looks goofy when he wakes up, he looks goofy when he's having sex, and he looks goofy drunk (although, admittedly, the last two are pretty goofy in real life too). A few bursts of inspiration also helped to spice things up (the wallet bit was hilarious).
Ultimately, this flash isn't funny because of the content, per se, but because of the delivery. Use your character designs/expressions with a bit more originality, and I can definitely see some amazing flashes in the future. As of right now, this is just a really good one.
Oh, and to the guy/gal before me: a condom doesn't mean shit if it breaks. Or, if you're just plain unlucky. So, uh, keep that in mind kiddo ;)
Fucking awesome.
A life lesson indeed.
Kids go to school, use condoms, and don't drink or you to will end up hanging yourself.
Haha.
I liked this movie. It was really depressing and sad though. Of course, this doesn't always happen, but sadly it does happen quite a bit. The drawings were so simple and cute. Good job.
What I noticed is that Jerry's life is blah. He doesn't have any friends, he doesn't go out for fun, does he meet all the girls he's taken home at the grocery store, and why doesn't he ever take his wallet with him? Of course, if you fixed all these problems, it will be too complicated for you. I'm just really picky. Mainly, what's bugging me is that the wallet incident is too repetitive. I mean, he got robbed 3 times! He shouldn't smartened up by at least the 2nd time. But if he did smarten up, it wouldn't be so funny when he gets robbed 3 times. xP
One of the things I really liked was how you implied that Jerry had protection on with the second girl. Then the girl became pregnant. It made me go, 'Wtf??' and made me laugh even harder.
Such a shame that Jerry had to die and go to hell. :[
Wow, I type a LOT. I just wanted to say what I liked and what I didn't. About what I didn't like, don't pay so much attention to that. I was just saying what was bugging me. If you changed it, then it would be less funny. Great flash, I loved it. Keep up the good work.
I can't believe they're letting me write this much....