wow
This was very good. It just shows how our lives just pass us by sometimes.
wow
This was very good. It just shows how our lives just pass us by sometimes.
There it is
What I live about newgrounds is flashes like these. Flashes showing true origionality and thought. I saw the so called "Mr. Twitchy" that this flash was supposibly based off of and I can say that your far surpasses anything he could have ever made that flash into. Your style is unique and original down to the very last detail of animation and storyline. Anyways back to that actual flash itself. This describes what most single American people do when they are older. Do the same thing everyday and never change the routine. It's what makes like unenjoyable and makes it seem pointless. What was interesting is that mild changes in Jerrys lifestyle had drastic changes on his overall future. That shows true story development and proves how great a writer you can be when writing story lines for flashes such as these. Overall, I can say that this flash is one of the most original on newgrounds and should be treated with respect. Even if the story seems linear and repetative to some people it's the actual storyline that makes this flash a one of a kind treat to watch.
Good Luck In Future Flashes,
SSJ1SonGokou
Scary fiction
Wow. I know its just a cartoon and fictional but if you are a blue collar, middle/lower class worker then that actually is not really far from real life for alot of us. Except the part where you leave your wallet in the drawer. You NEVER leave your money around a woman when your single. She has to get you to marry her for her to take all your money. Jerry deserved to die just for that alone.
on a whim?
Wow. That was pretty realistic. Life...just...moving. Good job? It was petty decent. Very long.
Whoa! im having a sezuire!
Man, that was one of the crazyest flashs i've seen in a while!
it was kinda sad in a way to see how boring and depressing his life was. but the humor was great, especialy the part about the wallet and the baby. the sound was great, i liked it when it was flashing through his day really fast and the sound still seemed perfect.
great job man and awesome flash i'm looking forward to seeing more of your stuff.