Great storyline
Great man, the storyline just hooked me after a minute. I think this is every man's fear of a day to day life. Hope to see more!
Great storyline
Great man, the storyline just hooked me after a minute. I think this is every man's fear of a day to day life. Hope to see more!
Well, goddamn!
Man, and I thought MY life sucked. Poor Jerry. Now, why he didn't take his wallet with him, I'll never know. And why did all his dates take his money?! Thieving bitches!
I liked the animation, and the story rings true. I think suicide is a bit much, but in this case, I can see why it would've been his only option. Again, poor Jerry.
I'll give it a 5.
THANK YOU
look, i usally dont give out good reviews or EVER tell anyone that what they did TRULY was the best thing i ever seen. BUT THANK YOU!!!
this has warmed my heart so much! i have a self-contious, anti-social friend name Jerry, and when i seen this and watched it i refered it to him. and all he said was:
jerry(11:52:56 PM): im not like that
jerry (11:53:02 PM): he actually gets laiid
jerry (11:53:10 PM): big difference
jerry (12:09:35 AM): lame
But this is the best flash i ever seen on the internet souly for that reason. its amazingly funny and whitty. and i loved EVERY second of it. i added it and you to my favorite submission/author and i cannot wait to see more work done by you! congrats my friend, Congrats!!!
Wow, pretty cynical.
I don't normally think of this place as a place to learn lessons, but I really feel bad for Jerry, although his life could have been a lot lot worse. Jerry was pretty stupid and made really some really bad choices. I just don't see someone in that situation killing themselves. He had a place to live, maybe didn't like his baby-mama, but killing yourself just because you have to work at a grocery store and you have a baby?
Seems pretty ridiculous. The humorous parts were funny however, and the art design was not the prettiest, but effective nonetheless.
To long for the jokes
I thought the Flash was pretty funny but it wasn't worth the wait. It just kept on going and going, making small funny jokes. The end jokes weren't even that good. Overall it was good but it was just too damned long for what it gave.