Reviews for Jerry

[sevenleafclover]

imprisoned by routine

Jerry's problem is that he was ruled by fear. fear causes us to cling to a routine in order to maintain a sense of security. but a routine you cant escape becomes a prison.
Jerry's routine would have been perfectly fine so long as he could leave it and return to it freely. COURAGE COURAGE COURAGE! To come and go as you please.
great job, you've scincerly pointed out an enormous modern social problem: the wasteland. try reading Joseph Campbell, a professor of mythology, and an amazing story teller. his life's work can be summed up in the phrase "follow your bliss"

[majorpwnage1]

damn dude you really just depressed me a little

that is exactly what my life is like minus the baby, and getting robbed. but damn dude. does that mean the ending is my fate as well?

[Bloodghast]

Simply stunning.

I loved the repeated fashion that you did it in, and how it got faster and faster and then OH LOOK, (Not spoiling it for those who ahve not watched it)
But yes, it was amazing, and your sequel (Jackie) was tied in perfectly.

[Battlesec]

wow

Yeah, it was a little too long in the middle, but overall it was really good. lol
It all really seems to be like real life, right?
10/10

[SFaPiL]

...concise...

Pretty much wraps up the meaning of life... I'm going to kill myself now... ;o)

Only flaw was that it got a bit too long in the middle, but I guess the purpose was to give the viewer a sense of "eternal routine".

Overall good job.
9/10
4/5