Good, but...
I really liked it, it was good, just not there completely. There seemed a couple spots where the lines didn't seem right, just little things. Stuff like this is really cool to see.
And don't get bogged down by people that say it doesn't belong on Newgrounds. I always thought of this site as a place for ANYONE to put up ANYTHING they've made with flash. I've seen complete and total crap put on this site, and your flash deserves a spot here MUCH more than most.
Yeah I keep spotting little things that bug me and it's driving me mad.. but it's finished now and I ain't going back to fix things, i'd be there forever D:
Thanks~
To the Guy below
Many of the people on Newgrounds act like 9-14 year olds. So this flash is perfect for Newgrounds. And giving this a poor score purely on that judgment proves your a douche bag. Excellently animated and adorable characters. A welcome change from the sprites and other lazy animations that clutter this site. Very original story as well.
Wow Awesome
Female animators rock.
For the guys who said it's to kiddie ooh excuse her for not making a blood bath type of movie. This definetly deserves top fifty it has more style then all the top 50. Well I can't wait too see more from you this move's gonna go from 4 to 4.15 at the least I think it will go higher if the straight blammers don't come by. Well I hope to see a game from you in the future also with your style that would rock. If you need help with the AS I'd be happy to help you.
If you ever need help compressing your toons PM me
remember nothing over 5 mb's unless you PM tom or wade
Tee hee...
That short was absolutely wonderful. It had the makings of something I would see on television. Keep at it, I am gonna watch other animations you have done now.
Wow
I loved the style, reminds me so much of those classic cartoons
Great Work.
Keep up.
5/5 what were you expecting? lol