Good Art, weak animation
Well, the headline basically says it all...I liked you drawing and your style, the humour was ok, too. Sound was sub par, not everything was clear and understandable...subtitles would help if better recording is not an option.
What really pulls this series down is the lack of fluid animation...especially because it's a movie based on action and fighting. Maybe you should use less detail on the characters when the action is going on and therefore do faster and more fluid fbf-animation.
The storyline was kinda funny, just a bit repetitive...DK killing one character after another and the rest of the pack just slaughtering Bowser's underlings en masse...wish you had used more fancy characters like childish, ever-grinning Cap. Falcon or wannabe Casanova Ganondorf...well, maybe next time ;-)
But I really liked how you transfered special moves from the game into the movie.
Overall, quite nice entertainment for a few minutes, but still improvable.