Nice
Wow, great animation and looked real good too. You ought to make longer animations, if you keep the same quality as this one in your future ones, you'll make lots of fans. I'm favoriting you in hopes you'll make more.
Reviews for "Subtle+Dynamic"
NionKokesu responds:
Thank you. I do plan to submit longer animations in the future. Thanks for the favorite and thanks for the review.
A good start.
So, you've shown us that you can use flash neatly, complete with Manga-esque drawing techniques.
I think you'd do well with this flash, if you decided what would happen next and take this further. Maybe add sound effects and of course some plot, as the drawing and animation techniques and style work well, so good work on that.
I'm intrigued to see what you'd do with this character, though you could have used something different that something that looks (by your own admission) suspiciously like a flying sperm, as it may raise slight concerns (along with my eyebrows)
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NionKokesu responds:
Thank you for the review, but as I mentioned in my original comments, this flash was done for two very specific assignments-subtle and dynamic animation (as explained in my new comments). It was my first opportunity to work in any medium I wanted, so I chose something I had never done-flash. As far as my choice of style in this assignment, time commanded me to use simple, efficient character designs...which is important to animation regardless. This happens to be the style that is simple and quick for me, and perfect for an assignment that I have one week (or one day when my file crashes right before the deadline) to complete.
The plot will not be extended since it was solely for use in the assignments, but I will try creating plots for this character in the future.
And as for the flying sperm. I did NOT see it as that when I created this. Some guys in my class called it that, which makes me a)want to change it and b)make sure everyone knows that's not what I was going for.
Thank you again for your thorough review. Your input is helpful and much appreciated.