That's pretty cool!
I like the simplistic outlines of the people. Did you rotoscope video for this, or just do it from your head?
Reviews for "-screwdriver-"
Not Bad
There was some good FBF here but it all was the same shape doing something, it got boring after a while. Also colouring in would be good as well, it just takes a lot of effort to do so.
Graphics weren't the best because it was mostly just an outline with the brush tool but they did a few cool things which was good. The parts with the square, black and white things were good too. The music suited perfectly.
5.7/10
2.3/5
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possibly-yodd responds:
Thanks ^_^ and as I mentioned earlier, tis visual tests + missed collab part. So I wasn't really expecting anything good to come of it. Maybe SOME DAY I can finish one of my big projects... maybe.
Thanks for the review.
K
^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool movie in terms of the graphics. The black/white objects overlapping each other created a pretty cool effect, and overall the animations were smooth and interesting to watch. The music complimented this nicely.
^^Needs Improving^^
Just seems a little scattered to me. Not really a theme to anything in here, just random animations.
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possibly-yodd responds:
If I could think of an idea I would get a plotline, but I suck right now :3.
Thanks.
A good start
Aside from the fact that this makes my eyes water, this is a nice start at a fbf animation.
I think on occasion you've drawn the lines of the arms so that it's a closed arm, which doesn't seem to work for me. It only lasts for a split second, but it's there and as a perfectionist, I'm against that.
The colour changes are neatly done and now you've worked the abstract crazyness angle of a flash, why not make it into something more substantial, like a story about screwdriver, for example?
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possibly-yodd responds:
I want to make a larger flash, maybe with a story, a better title, etc. But I am lacking ideas with this animation...
Thanks for the review.