Alright
Well the graphics where good and fit the style of the flash you where including in this but I feel from the start you did miss a lot about the main plot, although you mentioned part, it really didn't seem to fill it in and everything just seemed to run on for too long, maybe use less parts in your flash, just to keep some people a little more intrested.
Although some of the graphics where a little off, they where okay and the sound was also good as well as the voice acting, pretty good job on the peice, keep it up.
4/5
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