Great but..
It lacked music. You need more music in places.
I could see a heavy metal in the demon and werewolf ones, and the pirate one could have been more fast paced.
(By the way the ending was pretty good)
Reviews for "Pico's Time Tank"
The-Swain responds:
There wasn't a single moment in the whole toon where music wasn't playing. I know because I wrote every second of it.
Good, but not fantastic
The animation was very well done, backgrounds detailed as ever, and the sound was good enough.
One criticism I could make though, the fight scenes were a little slow paced, there wasn't really all that much feeling of danger (although I suppose it IS Pico, he doesn't have an awful lot to be scared of >_<)
Good work anyhow, 4 /5
The-Swain responds:
You're right about the lack of danger feeling, though. There wasn't really a point where he was in trouble, which is certainly what we intended. The conclusion is supposed to sort of be his ironic reward for haphazardly running through these scenes without a care.
Boring
really really really boring. All of your fight scenes are slow and lack action. Pico just stands there and shoots and the wolves dont do anything about it. the pirate fight scene was way too slow and the dragon one didnt look like a fight scene at all. Everyhting else is good except the lack of action.
The-Swain responds:
He runs and shoots, runs up walls, somersaults, swordfights, runs up an arm, flips and dodges.
Sure we'll get right on that.
Nicely made.
Very good, i liked the way of him beeing "the one" in a kind of way. Traveling through time was a new kick. As well as the nice voices on the pirates. Yar! Hehe, keep up the good work!
Yar~
Fantastic quality, a lot of spoofage, and it had a nice twist ending even though I saw it comming. Only thing I noticed that could have been done a bit better were the sound affects that were a touch to quiet, or too fuzzy in some spots. Other than that, great job, and I hope to see some more flashes like this soon. 5/5 for a nicely done flash, and 10 for seemingly no noticeable flaws.