Hmm... Yeah, I can see it...
Well, the art didn't appeal so much to me, but then again, I've never seen any of "zekey"s works.
I did like the music, and the overall style and beat to it.
If you were to make more of these, I would definitely not complain. ^^
Right on.
what?
Also, I am not sure what is going on besides the fact that the bumblebee married a flower. Maybe the flash coincides with the song and we just dont know it because 1. Im not Japanese 2. No subtitles. I can't stress enough on how subtitles can help flashs with poor sound quality or with a different language..
Sounds bad... looks alright
You've got the beginnings of a great flash here. Firstly, I couldn't stand the audio. Not because it was a foreign song, but it took me half of the song to work out that it was foreign.
The animation is decent, although it does look ill-conceived and drawn with MS Paint. If you did draw this in flash, you really need to invest in a tablet, zoom in closer and take more time to draw, so you can give us a more detailed picture.
This does have a plot, which is nice, one of the redeeming points of your work. You've come through Star Day and have a decent scoring flash to show for it. Good work.
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i don't see how the fact you couldn't understand it was foreign influenced your score but ok
thanks for the review