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Reviews for "Dockatar: The random guy"

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good. The graphics were surprisingly good. You had some good three dimensional effects in this, and the storyline was kind of interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound wasn't that good. The Speakonia was really low and hard to hear at some points, so you could have made subtitles or made it more audible.

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IZSBHR responds:

OK, thanks (:

nice job

liked the three dimensional effect with flash... doing great on the animations but honestly i got lost quit quickly cause i couldnt hear anything but either way keep it up.

IZSBHR responds:

Thanks (:

Funny

-Good-
This movie was pretty funny. I liked how you paradied "Avatar", the result was pretty damn funny. The graphics were good, That part with the map was realy wierd, how did you do that? Multiple skews? The Japanese Symbols in the background were cool, did they realy mean anything?

-Bad-
As already said, The voice went to fast. It would have been nice if slowed down and if still hard to understand subtitles. (Not much left to be said)

-Overall-
A funny parady, seqal plz.

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IZSBHR responds:

The Chinese symbols just have random funny sayings on them, and I also translated Dock Division to Port People.

Sequel, maybe. I dunno. The map was skewed and the mountains weren't. Just enlarged.

good job!

I liked it a lot, you did a good job. But it could use some work, true. It was hard to understand and as the review before, subtitles does sound like it would help a lot. Otherwise, good job(again)!

IZSBHR responds:

Thanks :)

A little fast

This is a well done flash, though I think there are certainly areas where you can improve.

Yes, you could add subtitles - a small balck bar across the bottom of the screen and a regular white font doesn't take much, trust me.

Other than that, maybe you could slow the pace of the speech down, so that we can comprehend what is actually being said.

Still, you've done a great job on the graphics, so please take my comments on board and make the next installment in the series better for it.

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IZSBHR responds:

Thanks :)

- Subtitles... hmm...
- The speech is to fast?
- Thanks again :)