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^^Good Points^^
I liked this short. The introduction to it was pretty neat, and you changed the mood right after that, which was pretty funny. Liked the music, it was a great way to introduce the characters in this new series.
^^Needs Improving^^
The art wasn't very good at all. I wasn't too happy with you just having plain black backgrounds either. Having some type of background would have been much better.
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