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Reviews for "car and driveway"

A good start here

This is a neat animation, although I'd prefer to see some animation on the mouths a little more.

The first close up of the kid is a little freaky, but thankfully doesn't set the tone for the animation. He needs to change the shape of his mouth more, as when we make sound effects, we don't leave our mouths completely still like his was.

You've got the basic drawing off to a great start and in the future, you can certainly learn more advanced techniques.

I'll look forward to reviewing your later improved submissions...

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10 for humor

The graphics and animation leave something to be desired. At least I could make out what was happening.

The sound didn't come across too well but not everyone has great sound equipment.

Very funny though!

It doesn't take long to load, it's worth watching.

crowdedheadspace responds:

well considering it was my first and i got plenty more coming... i appreciate your honest review...

my number one goal is to make you laugh... then the animation and the qaulity come into play... i will however keep trying my hardest to improve on the graphics