Very entertaining
Well I have to say that this was very entertaining some really nice "ANIMATION" and pretty smooth I like the style here of "VERSES" style and hope you make even more of these its a pretty brilliant idea, but anyways as for any changes and improvements I think its really good as is and does not need any changes at this time, so nice work indeed on this amusing animation.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as for any changes and improvements I think its really good as is and does not need any changes at this time
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