NINJA!
Well, this is quite a long episode. I quite enjoyed this and I'm beginning to see the series progress. Maybe you should consider making the episode a little shorter, as there is the chance for the viewer to get bored in the middle.
Great sprite manipulation, well written and good use of backgrounds and fade to white for the flashbacks.
Can't wait for the next one... how long did it take you to make this?
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Shorter? LONGER! EACH EPISODE MUST BE EXPONENTIALLY LONGER!
K
^^Good Points^^
A good continuation of the first episode. Glad it got off to a quick start and picked up right where it left off. The sprite manipulation and animation was the best part in this. The storyline was good too, seems like a good series forming.
^^Needs Improving^^
Again, the stationary camera isn't doing you any good. It would be a lot more interesting if you moved it around a bit.
The stationary camera is not only doing me good, it is the true joy of the ages.
Made me chuckle a couple of times.
I think this series would be totally improved if you enlarged the screen, so that we could see the character details well, without having to squint at the screen.
The start was great - I liked the Link/guard exchange and the 'hasten your demise!' and ninjitsu bits made me chuckle.
The end bit, with the Link/sprite exchange kinda tired me. The flashback didn't seemed slightly irrelevant and the exchange as a whole wasn't as amusing as the rest.
This episode did make me think that maybe the story could be better told with original characters. I understand the greatness of not having to tell the backstory but practically nothing in here needed to be exclusive to the Zelda world and and with original characters, you wouldn't get people annoyed at folk behaving 'out of character'. Well, I suppose that's a large debate that I shouldn't get too deep into.
Works well enough and I suppose this way, you don't have to draw anything... heh.
Another thing I wondered - why did you submit this as 2 separate episodes on the same day, when the maximum allowed size is 10MB?
Great voices for everyone. Slight popping again from Link, though barely noticable.
I would have liked to see some credits for the voice actors etc.
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Made me chuckle a couple of times. You should definitely enlarge the screen. It could have used some more editing.
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The screen must be smaller. SMALLER. always smaller.
funy
good oh and btw thebigtarget1 zelda does not suck she is cool and awesome and stuph like that
The big target sure put up a big target for you. HAhahaha... ah. Good times.
Male Fairy
That would be one gay fairy. Its interesting and different, but not my exact style.
Must you classify everything with your pedestrian gender profiling? Some are free to express their true gender. I mean if it's smaller than your hand and has wings, does it really matter what gender it is?
Unless you plan to have sex with it... which I think would prove deadly to the tiny creature you murderer.