Reviews for Sherbert the Cat Pat-Day

[Bezman]

too many rough edges

The bug with the 'facts' button is probably because you have the facts after the movie. Flash loads frames in order, so if you want pre-loader content, place that first. And you can use 'if(_root._framesloaded>5)' or whatever to check a particular frame.

Drawings could have been improved. I thought the shot with the border closing in on the dude's eyes didn't work too well. frankly, your drawings aren't good enough to pull off that kind of 'dramatic' shot.

The facial expressions during the ramble about Guinness made me smile. I think you should maybe exaggerate your expressions more.

The Guinness ramble and the drunk-malarkey both got a smile from me.

I felt the way you broke up the start with your 'the most amazing adventure yet' 'here it comes' 'okay, okay, this is it' 'TITLE' snippets of text seemed slightly irritating.

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It was a decent story and some of it made me smile.

But I just kinda felt like there were too many rough edges for me to be able to really enjoy it. Also, some of it seemed kinda formulaic and dull.

Jonimator responds:

Thanks for the review. I do know how to fix the buttons, but right now it's pure lazyness. I will get to it. Anyway thanks for your input.

[head2toewinner]

Not that great

It really couldn't hold my attention to well so I kind of lost touch with it pretty quick. What I do really remember though is that the sound was pretty annoying and so was the animation. Probably not a movie I will ever come across again.

[Abs55]

funny!

The animation was very funny, the jokes were really good. The graphics, animation and sound were good. The only problem was the buttons at the begining but overall great.

Jonimator responds:

Thanks for the review, glad you liked it!

[Abyssus]

An enoyable watch.

Something to pass the time, although the jokes were spread throughout the flash much to thinly to make it very funny. And, during the preloader, I clicked on 'fun facts' and the movie startd up. Except the first bit had no sound.

I suggest you try and fix the graphics up a bit and make the jokes more solid, but I did like the way you tried to use effects every chance you could get.

I enjoyed this flash. (Review request club)

Jonimator responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm sorry about the button glitch, you have to wait till it fully loads. :(

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice St. Patrick's Day themed movie here. I like how in this episode you actually had some voice overs, which were quite well done. The storyline was rather funny, with a good amount of jokes spread in between.

^^Needs Improving^^
The thing that can improve the most would have to be the graphics. That one part at the dude's house the background looked like runescape or something.

Review Request Club

Jonimator responds:

Lol, honestly I like the backgrounds, I was using Photoimpression 4 to draw them out fancy. Runescape though, that hurts. heh heh heh. I'm glad you liked it though!