not bad
Not bad, here's a positive critique. The Art could use a some approving and yeah a quick movie wouldn't be a bad idea. Other than that it was decent. Hope you don't get blamed and if you do, I tried to save you ( i voted well, cause it's not bad for a second video.)
Well I didn't get blammed, but thanks for the save. I was really hoping for the score not to be effected by how many animations I've done before.
Yea, I had to rush the art a little, so my next stuff will probably be better.
Not too bad
I have a fever,
And the only perscription is more cowbell.
You sir, are now recognized by me as awesome.
LOL
This looks like it will be a hilarious movie. I can't wait until it comes out (if it ever does). The graphics are pretty good but could be better and use shadows. It got me anticipated which Flash movies rarely do to me.
It definitely looks like it will be a funny movie... the voice acting needed a bit of work or either the sound setting was set too low... To fix that go into File>Publish Settings>Flash>Stream settings and set it to 112kbps. That should make the audio quality for audio that has been set to stream higher but unfortunately increases the file size.
Lipsyncing was very good, but you could add a bit more movement into the character that talks like he moves up his microphone so he looks a bit excited... but the main thing about the graphics that needs improving is shadows... you need to add shadows to your graphics.
Good job, can't wait for the movie to come out!
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^^Good Points^^
This looks like the full version will be very good. I was pretty well entertained by just this trailer. I liked the epic music and voicing, which really made this seem serious, and I guess that is what really makes this fun to watch.
^^Needs Improving^^
I think you may have given away a bit much in the trailer. Basically all there needs to be added to this is an ending.
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oh yeah
Not an original idea, but by golly its the best one ive seen yet, what i want to see from you is THE ACTUAL MOVIE, you know, just a 3 min flash thats the movie, i would love that, great job for second flash, keep it comin!