Nice
Realy good for a Clock Crew flash.
Reviews for "EggClock's Lie"
PenguinLink responds:
Thanks a lot for the kind words and for the review. :)
Nice glad to see your still working.
Avery nice flash penguin especially for a clock crew one.
PenguinLink responds:
Thanks! Glad to see you're alive as well.:) Thanks a lot for the kind words and for the review.
Well
Was pretty funny! I liked the humor, but the animation wasnt the greatest
PenguinLink responds:
Thanks for the review, glad you found it to be funny.
One of the best clock animations I've seen
Well your reward for all your hard work (besides all that satisfaction, good score etc nonsense) is a rare review from me- consider yourself lucky!
I'm not a great fan of clock animations, but as they go that was one of the best that I have seen. So here comes the break down:
Graphics: minimal and fairly standard for a clock animation. They were certainly pretty and colorful, but with minimal animation involved it is hard to give them a high score. I realize this is largely due to the constraints of the clock animation style, and perhaps in future you could work on more going on in the background etc. to keep the viewer entertained with what he is looking at rather than simply the witty dialogue (more about that later). Of course I have no clue how hard that would be, what with my non-existent animation skills, and believe me even a waggling line is way beyond my capability, but I'd like to see a little more going on in future projects.
Style: clock animation, so loses points on the originality front. Having said that it is more colorful than most that I have seen, and is certainly well drawn, with a nice, clean, simple look.
Sound: Again, same old voices seen in far too many movies, but I can't mark you down too much for that as it is part and parcel of a clock movie. The music was great though, and always appropriate for the scene being shown, and on the whole it was very nicely synched together.
Violence: None really, but you got a few marks for making a clock piss himself :)
Interactivity: None- enough said.
Humor: Now here is where this movie really set itself above most other clock movies out there. It was a good plot with plenty of witty lines and it certainly got a few laughs out of me. Excellent comic use of the word 'shit' and I never thought a crudely drawn yellow 'piss circle' could make me laugh so much. A bit random in places, but you didn't let the jokes drag on too long and on the whole it was just the right length to keep me entertained right up to the end.
So pretty damn good for a clock movie, and a solid 7/10 from me. Some better graphics and something a tad more original with your obvious sense of humor and you'll be getting even higher marks in future :)
PenguinLink responds:
This is serioulsy the best review I have ever received from any of the flash animations I have ever made. I agree with all the points you made about the graphics, and about how it isn't that quite original since it is a Clock animation. I am very pleased you found my sense of humor amusing, since it was one of the factors I was quite afraid of because probably users wouldn't find it as funny as you did.
I really wasn't expecting a review from you, and it really came as a surprise. This review means a whole lot to me and I much thankful for it. Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism, the kind words, and the overall effort you made in writing out this review. Again, thanks a whole lot and I hope you'll enjoy my next installments as you did with this one. :)
Not bad!
The long awaited movie has finally come out!
-Graphics-
Not bad for a clock movie. It contained some fairly neat graphics with some nice looking shadow.
-Style-
I would love to call it original but....well... its a clock movie. Been done hundreds of times before. :-)
Your "Clocks" still looked quite good and I was very impressed by it.
-Sound-
I have mixed feelings about your sound. I enjoyed the music which fit the movie perfectly. One thing I do not like about ALL clock movies is the speaktonia sounds. Not my thing! Do not enjoy the sounds of that voice nor do I find jokes as funny coming through in that tone.
The comedic part of this movie was overall fairly good. I think the script you came up with was fairly well thought out and somewhat good humour.
One problem I have with the sound is that even thought it was funny, It was hard at times to here what they were saying. I know that isnt your fault but is loses some points with me.
-Violence-
It wasnt so much 'violent' as it was silly. I guess the only real violence I could see was not Physical, more Verbal. Still, I am a big fan of verbal violence. YOU LITTLE PRICK! :-P
-Interactivity-
I hope you dont expect me to explain why that got a zero!
-Humor-
^ Read sound part ^
-Overall-
A seven is a fairly high overall score to recieve from me. I never given out a 10's anymore. I know I did when I first joined but you know, We have all done stupid things when we first join.
Congratulations on making a great movie!
-Sterockicy-
PenguinLink responds:
Thanks for the review, Sterockicy! I'm glad that at the very least you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism and for the nice comments. Thanks for the review! :)