Sweet work!
I love the way you have used this flash as a way to show off your skills, and the way you make the characters aware of the actual flash.
The main reason I liked it was the boldness, the way it just came out with the jokes and didn;t give you time to stop laughing beofre the next one.
I look foward to the full improved episode-
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Thanks agian.
Yeah I'm working really hard on all this trying to make it better and better. The first episode should hopefully be done in a few months.
nice
that movie was pretty funny it was a well done movie so i think it diserves a 5..... if it could go higher 6
Glad you liked a movie you helped make so much. Hurray for compliments to hard work. ^^
Great job.
Its a great job you did hear, not as good as the other one but i guess your learning. It was a little short tho so try to lengthen it :)
I know, I have one more short left to do. Then I'm making an actual episode. Trust me it will be at least 6 minutes.
enjoyable watch, though
I liked the way you just threw us straight into the animation without an 'intro'.
I didn't feel the art was a massive step up. Your hands were better and the sleeveless duder's lineless arms are definitely a nicer style. But it's only evolved as I'd hope to see over the course of a beginner's series. Hardly cause for a massive celebration.
I felt the backgrounds were a massive step up - nothing stood out as pretty and nothing complex was there to challenge you, but compared to last time - where elements of the barn stood out as ugly - it's a big improvement.
My only criticism graphically was the end-screen with the slightly sloppy white 'highlight' lines on the spiky thing.
Suggestions would be to try giving the guys shading, maybe try removing thin lines altogether... the usual. Experiment and continue trying out new styles until you decide on what works best for you.
The boobies made me smile.
The repeated breaks to flash up a word or two made me chuckle. I think you could have gone further, maybe repeating that joke a couple more times, to get it even more ridiculous.
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Anyway, it was an enjoyable watch, though not quite as chucklesome as its predecessor. No real flaws, but the repeating flashing words just weren't as funny as the emo glasses.
Hmmm, I'll try harder and think more on the jokes in future movies. Maybe I'll get a few poeple to watch it over before submitting to see if I can improve any jokes. Thanks.
I'll also add some shading to the characters for depth and stuff.
DUDERS ROCK
also, do u play lineage 2, because there was a soulshot sound when he falls LOL
Nah, I've never played it but seen poeple play itt. Thanks for the heads up on that though. I never noticed. lol