Great game, but...
Personally I don't think it's money material yet. It needs to be a bit more epic then this to be worth the $15.99 or so that you're asking. I'm not saying it's bad though, just a little flawed. Battles become repetetive quite easily. Maybe more exp per kill or a weapon that shoots all enemies at once could be added. If it was me asking, I would really like to see multi-functions for the weapons. For example, with the auto assault gun you could choose to fire two shots at one enemy and one shot at a weaker enemy, or just blast away randomly or at one enemy. That would be great, and it would make battles more interesting. ~-1 to style for repetetive battles.
Also, I noticed that battles always take place during the day even when it's night, and your character has no shadow. I'll overlook that though, cuz the maw's look cool =)
Also, I think you should make a gamble feature somewhere in the game. Making money by fighting is incredibly lengthy, and like I said the battles get repetetive. Blackjack, anyone? Maybe that's a more significant function that the Inn's could use, instead of talking and guessing Donna's last name. Of course, if you did make a gamble feature there would have to be some sort of limit to how much you could bet, like 500-1000. I honestly think this would make gameplay funner and a bit smoother. ~-1 to interactivity for driving me nuts tryin to bring in the bux.
Sound? hmmm... I think you could have a bit more variety then what's available. Maybe like an option that lets you choose multiple tunes or already existing tunes. I know the game is already huge, but some of those tunes made me want to repeatedly bash my head against a brick wall. No offense, though... they weren't TOO terrible. ~-3 to sound for... the sound.
Your humor was a bit off. Rather, a LOT off. At least you tried though, so I won't be too much of a dick about it. I agree with others when they say they would like to see the characters making different faces as they speak. When they're skeptical a good "o.O" face would be nice lol. This would definitely add to the humor your trying to create (although it IS a lot of work D= maybe I'm being too critical). You could also throw in some more original jokes, you know, the kind that make you LOL and ROFL. ~-1 to graphics and -6 to humor.
Violence was meh, but that didn't make a difference. Split in half.
Overall though, a great game which provides plenty of hours of fun, nice gameplay, and the occaisonal headache ;) it wouldn't be an rpg without the headaches. Good job, keep up the excellent work and I really hope to see more improvements, who knows maybe you'll get to the point where I want to buy it too =) ~-2 to overall for the repetetiveness, -1 to overall for the headaches, and +2 to overall for sheer effort and keeping me awake until 4 in the morning playing this frickin thing.
I hope my comments/criticism helps you.