okay!
For a teaser it was okay, it didn't really explain what it was about. The text for the chracters went way to fast to read but the graphics were really quite cool. You should make a proper trailer to get more poeple to watch the real one.
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Yeah well, I didn't know so many people would want to read those, I would've made them last longer. Anyway, thx for reviewing.
K
^^Good Points^^
Looks like it could be a cool movie coming out. People playing characters that are video games. I have no idea what is going on, but whatever, it looks like a cool movie.
^^Needs Improving^^
Just said, this didn't give me a very good idea about what this movie is going to be about, so that is one thing you may want to think about in the future.
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Yes well, it is a teaser, so it's supposed to, ya know, tease. Make you not sure of what it's about. Maybe an actual trailer would've been a better choice.
Good but...
I think that there are some improvements needed like um...well you know wth...oh forget it...but yeah I want to see the real deal man! Good luck.
Thanks for the suggestions? I guess... Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Nice preview
I'm watering at the mouth with anticipation of what the real thing is actually all about - just what a preview should be.
You've done good work with the graphics and some great additions to the joke department have made this a flash to remember.
Just how long is it going to be before we see the finished article (and my review for it)?
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Well thanks for reviewing. It's still going to be awhile before it's out though. Due to... lazyness. Lol, anyway, it'll get finished, just don't hold your breath yet.
above-par teaser, but I hate teasers
I liked the Lunar Lander abilities.
While you were showing the characters, it all flashed by too quickly to read, then the ending seemed relatively slow (specially the masking on the 'tetris unleashed').
Pacman has a little white line. No biggie - just mentioning.
It could've been cooler if the text of the enemies kinda scrolled in or something...
I found it cool how the rotating enemies looked rather good, despite only having 4 frames.
The coloured character seemed like he could use a tad more work. Consider shading and maybe make the lines on the scarf a shading job, rather than using those bold lines for them.
Numeral '3' seemed a bit crappily drawn. If it's part of a fontface, you should maybe have tried drawing a better '3' yourself.
After watching it, I did go back and read the text, aided by the flash menu. It seemed like you had a cool idea, with the different games fighting each other. Not sure if I like all the weapons you added though.
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Some good graphics, but in my opinion there's not really enough here to enjoy. No truly spectacular graphics for a graphics showcase (though the green rotating figures were really well drawn) and not really enough glimpses of the plot or action for me to enjoy that aspect.
It's an above-par teaser, but I hate teasers, as that's all they do - tease. They don't really let me go all the way to satisfaction, yaknow?
A very fair review, thanks for taking the time to write it. glad you think the characters were well drawn. I couldn't get rid of that white line on Pac-Man BTW, it just WOULDN'T go away! Urrgh! I got very frustrated by that line. Anyway, thanks for your review.