Reviews for Mario In Newgrounds

[Coop]

Music File Too Large

Well, this looked impressive, as when I looked over the stuff before watching, the filesize does look quite large.

However, judging by the length of the movie, I can only conclude that it's the lenght of the music track - taylor it to your flash to make it smaller, maybe search the Audio Portal for tracks you can use.

I'd try using jingles to either 1) Differentiate between the characters or 2) show the emotions they are feeling, as it seemed to me that they could ahve conveyed this.

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Dugh responds:

Thanks for your review! :D

[skyline-goomba]

nice movie

a little overated though.

[gothic-chic]

Short...

This movie has originality written all over it, but I found it too short. There's not much for me to say, except please make the continuation longer.

Dugh responds:

I do! Watch out for Mario In Newgrounds III..! Its out soon and it will be better than the other ones!

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good to see you gave another go at creating a similar series to your last. The music was good throughout, and the storyline is unique having this kingdom attacked by a computer cursor. Looking forward to seeing some more.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the music must be compressed. File size way too big. Next, I'm not seeing the whole link between the mushroom kingdom and the computer. Can the cursor just go wherever, but Mario is caught?

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[hooya2]

bad grammar, and too short

that pretty much says it all; next time have someone who actually speaks english type the text

it's too short for me to really give much of a critique of the content; i smiled a little when peach got right-clicked, but the cursor vs character thing could have been done better

and after all the times peach has been kidnapped, i can't really see her being the kind of girl to beg for her life

Dugh responds:

Thanks for the review!
The part where Peach begs for her life is just to make it a little drammatic.