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^^Good Points^^
Good to see you gave another go at creating a similar series to your last. The music was good throughout, and the storyline is unique having this kingdom attacked by a computer cursor. Looking forward to seeing some more.
^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the music must be compressed. File size way too big. Next, I'm not seeing the whole link between the mushroom kingdom and the computer. Can the cursor just go wherever, but Mario is caught?
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Music File Too Large
Well, this looked impressive, as when I looked over the stuff before watching, the filesize does look quite large.
However, judging by the length of the movie, I can only conclude that it's the lenght of the music track - taylor it to your flash to make it smaller, maybe search the Audio Portal for tracks you can use.
I'd try using jingles to either 1) Differentiate between the characters or 2) show the emotions they are feeling, as it seemed to me that they could ahve conveyed this.
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Thanks for your review! :D
Very good!
I realy liked your flash! The idea is pretty original, and you made everything on Newgrounds very realistic!
Keep up the good work!
//Xipp
Happy to hear!
Watch out for Mario In Newgrounds III!
Out soon
It was cool
Well, it was a little short, but it was alright. I actually en joyed this movie, as it was very well animated and put together.
Sound was good too.
Overall it waas an alright flash, can't wait to see the next one. =]
Thanks! I´m actually working on part 2 now. =D
Short...
This movie has originality written all over it, but I found it too short. There's not much for me to say, except please make the continuation longer.
I do! Watch out for Mario In Newgrounds III..! Its out soon and it will be better than the other ones!