My ears are bleeding...
Yes, it was a very nice animation. I give you points for that.
But... Everything else ruined it.
1. The Music.
Way to pick a winner here. That was the most annoying piece of crap I have ever heard. And what she was singing about was retarded too. If you're gonna use a foreign song at least use one that is good on the ears. Not something as old as Ozaki, but worse.
2. The hamster
Wow... a hamster. I thought this was going to be Oraban Ebichu here.
3. The basic story
Could you think of something less original? We've seen this stuff so many times before, I think we are done. No more Love Hina, Tenchi Muyo, El Hazard stuff anymore. It's not very hard to do something different, as long as you try. Oh and way to stereotype everyone. I'm sure that's original.
Like I said the animation was good. But if everything else was sub-par then the animation doesn't really count all that much. Try again but with something more original.