keep it up man!
another one that i like
(again)how do you make those great camera angles plz tell me
Reviews for "Wrath, Sloth, Gluttony"
RSQViper responds:
Glad you liked it! Was my first attempt at poetry in a VERY long time. The animation was quite different than I normally do for effect and time-saving.
I answered your question in your last review, so check that out. Any more questions, feel free to PM me here.
Nice!
I liked it pretty much,
there's one thing you might consider next time, though, and that might be an option for subtitles. The voice was clear enough for me to understand, but subtitles generally help non-native english speakers extremly.
RSQViper responds:
I use them only when necessary because of the video cam I use in my movies. They really become a pain in the ass, to be honest.
Also, when something has subtitles in it, I always find myself reading and not watching, so they can be pretty distracting and I didn't want that in this movie. As for the non-english speaking folks, they'll just have to listen harder because I don't feel like putting in 2 or more extra hours for a hand full of people in all my movies.
Thanks for the constructive review!
It carries a rhythm
...quite a bit like "The Raven" and "Teltale Heart". It was a good concept and I did watch it all the way to the end. I wasn't thrilled with how much it reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe, almost like a rip off without the rip. Given that we are all inspired by the subconcious memory (or sometimes the conscious) I can't say that it would be right to say anything condemning. The rest I throughly enjoyed and a good piece of work is a good piece of work. Thank you for sharing.
RSQViper responds:
I have actually only ever heard a very small part of "The Raven" which is how I started the thing with a crow.
But, in all honesty I was mostly influenced by Dr Suess and his rhyming scheme. Telltale Heart was also something I've never read or heard, I've no idea what it is actually. :3
Thanks for the review!
Good
For a moment I thought it was something from Full Metal Alchemist but it was your own original flash. I liked it and the story went well. Try to make more of these.
RSQViper responds:
I am mulling over doing a Christmas Poem. I just have to be struck with a divine thought...
Glad you liked my work and thank you for your review. It means a lot. =)