you sorta rushed it.
when sonic tells mario the story, well, mario, luigi, and peach dont even know who tails,amy, cream, and knuckles are.so think about the order more.
Reviews for "Super Mario bros Z ep 4 (old series)"
Pretty Cool
It started off slow at the beggining and then got cool like the other ones, and i really like the koopa bros from paper mario that was cool.
Uhm...
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Well. This episode was good, but I liked better the first three (Specially the third one). This episode had action, but not as much action as the others. It also lacked of humer (from my point of view). The Spirit Squad (from WWE) joke was good, but I just smiled with it, nothing else.
The storyline is begining to develop, and that's good. However, it is too linear yet. There are no surprises and, after four episodes, you know that the episode will follow the same way (heroes continue trying to solve the Chaos Emerald problem, some new story content is learned, a powerful foe appears (in this case, four not-so-powerful foes, but that increased their power with the Emerald's help), fight, episodes end). I'd like to watch something else. I know that you're following Dragon Ball Z storytelling stile, but you should improve this. You have a lot of talent, use all of it.
The animation (sprites, backgrounds, etc) was excelente. You really know how to mix them to create what you want to create. The music and the effects were good too.
Violence... Well, we're talking about a story based on the Dragon Ball Z series. If there wasn't any violence, it good be a bad parody xD
Only 2 points for interactivity, because there wasn't too much of it (it isn't the idea anyway. This is a movie, not a game). I liked better the stile you used in the third episode for the dialogues. With the voice of every character that was talking appearing when he/she said the first word (sorry, sometimes I don't know how to explain things in English ^^U). It remind me of some RPG games I played when child.
Well, that's it. I liked (and like) your story. I also liked all Dragon Ball series (except GT xP). But its plot needs to improve someway. Avoid making an episode similar to the previous one.
KilyK
man this is cool
your the coolest i like dragon ball z and i like sonic & shadow and i like the mario bros and you've put them all together i am your nmber 1 fan ttttttttttttthhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnkkkkkkk
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anybody notice that the koopas they where fightng matched the colour of the attacker?