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Reviews for "Submit"

gread, but confusing

fantastic animation, great music, ive nevwer seen anything like it, it was fantastic... i just did not see the story line. i dont know if i missed the preequel (if there is one) but if there isn't, pleas make one that ties the story line togeather

Masonogy1 responds:

The only preequel needed is to know how to Newgrounds website works as it is just my interpretation of what happens to the SWF files which are submitted here! Glad you liked it however! :D

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It gave an interesting perspective of a flash file being submitted to Newgrounds but that's about it, it was still pretty good though.

Haha, pretty good man.

One thing i might suggest for your future work is to work on is overall sensibility and flow of the cartoon. Maybe I blinked or something but what was the little glowing orb? I liked how the little swf file got to the portal but I'm not sure that the little steps he has to take to get there make all that much sense. I don't know if you did for this cartoon, but I find that storyboarding and thinking stuff over a little bit of time really helps sort out the kinks and makes the cartoon pack JUST THAT MUCH MORE PUNCH!! *oompf*

Overall, however, I enjoyed it. Made me laugh and have some NG nostalgia on the side. *sheds a single tear*

Keep up the good work!

werid but i liked it

i'd give it a 8 but i didn't fully understand what happining contrer to a real life but o well 3/5

Masonogy1 responds:

It really depends on how long you've been on the site... Alot of seasoned animators would understand it, but then again alot of new guys to the site may not... Maybe that was teh reason? But either way I'm glad you got some enjoyment out of it! :D

Hooray! for Danny Elfman's music...

...your animation was alright as well...

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