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Reviews for "Phoenix Wrong 3"
A shame
I honestly believe you should continue these- It was amusing
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stuped bit funny
Funny as hell.
I read some of the other reviews you got and there was one about AMV Hell. I looked it up and I have to say it's not as funny as this. With AMV Hell you have to know all those animes to know what's going on but with this, you don't have to have played the game for it to be funny. Nice work on this.
Not bad, not bad
But not spectacular either.
This movie is fairly good and shows that you are progressing in your ability to create flash movies.
Graphics: You used the sprites at hand well and have appropriate posing in all situations. The lip-synching has gotten better with each Phoenix wrong, though there are still a few problems, but it is spot on in the Lewis Black joke (which was probably pretty difficult) . If you could make slight edits to the official sprites to do more elaborate animations you could improve your graphics, difficult though it may be.
Style: The graphic style is from a game, but one that has not seen alot of usage in flash movies like this. It actually lends itself quite decently to what you are trying to do.
Sound: The audio is mostly clear, but there is some fuzziness or static to it. You could clear this up with some sound editing programs, but you'd have to learn how to use those :P
Violence: None really.
Interactivity: Play button, my old friend.
Humor: I don't judge humor based on originallity when it is obviously taken from another source. I say that you've used alot of the audio you've chosen very well. Especially the Homer, Tenacious D, and Lewis Black bits.
Overall: You've obviously improved over the course of these movies and if you continue to make them, I believe you'll just keep getting better and start giving us something spectacular.
AshfordPride responds:
I'm glad that someone noticed! This whole series was really just an excuse for me to learn the basics of flash. I never really wanted to make more than one... I was just tinkering around in flash.
Thanks for the review. It's probably the most constructive one I've ever recieved.