Great!
You have a great storyline and very stylisticly unique action series going here. I thought it would be over when the music cut in...but you gave me more, and I thank you for it! The "two guns" bit was a great little added humor there and it all really ties into what seems to be the start of an interesting series. I'll be waiting eagerly for more.
Nice compositing!
Nice compositing! The 3d and 2d blended in quite nicely, I can tell that you have spent a longtime on this flash - especially modeling, animating, lighting and rendering.. not to mention compositing it into flash (question: how did you put it into flash?). My only critique was that the plot of the story did not flow too well but thats only my opinion but the rest was great! Hope to see more of your coming stuff in the future.
swift3d is pretty much geared to importing the models into flash, it's pretty easy! Glad you liked and appreciate the time spent on it!
it's awesome.
You need, better voice acting. they all sound the same... but it's really badass otherwise..
Wow!
A vast improvement over your last flash, Log!
(I watched the full version on your site)
*SPOILERS AHEAD*
In my opinion, everything was done greatly, but I felt bad when the Green marine died ;(. He was cool, with his Dual Rifles.
Anyway, the ending fight of the episode was great, the Terran and Protoss against the Zerg, and then the Zantaboan at the end. Another cliffhanger at the end.
Oh, and the two Dark Archons seemed a bit... Small? I mean, they were as tall as the Marines! Great job on the overlords this time -- they have faces now! As well as looking a lot more menacing. I could really get the feeling of how they were directing the Zerg Scourges.
The mutalisks were kind of ugly, they seemed like a bunch of shapes stuck on each other, but I'm sure your next flash will improve a lot on that!
I also enjoyed the Zantaboan Chase near the middle of the flash-- Great job on that.
Nothing else to say, except it was freaking awesome! I can't wait for the finale!
Cheers!
nice
niceley done
i liked the grafics of the creatures