This made my day.
I googled "Newgrounds BBS Frank" and this came up. I made that song one day in 8th grade to make fun of the rising emo scene. I 13 at the time.
Great movie, thanks for making it.
Reviews for "Yellow Mustard"
Frenzy responds:
Ha ha, no problem. I found this song linked in the BBS once and thought it was funny so I made a Flash about it. It was fun to make, so no problem, and thanks for the review!
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I liked it. couldve used more mustard though. gosh.
Frenzy responds:
Lol. Thanks for the review!
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+++ Great font. Nice mustardy colour.
++++ Great mix of those 2 tunes sets the tone well.
--- Graphics were a bit messy in places. Disliked the way the graphics moved, revealing cut-line, before arm/end were added.
---- End kinda lacked dynamism. I think some radial lines, some starburst effect, may have worked well.
++++++ Had me chuckling away. Watched it 3 times, bewildered and grinning the 1st time, guffawing on the 2nd, chortling the 3rd. I chuckle now, as I think back to it.
Like my own DYMLB!!! animations, I think the humour is found as what we initially imagine to be a fairly long video gives a sudden cry, that overpowers all else. YELLOW MUSTAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRd!!! Nothing else matters. The video is resolved. And all in an instant, we find it to be a far simpler matter than we previously believed.
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I laughed. How I laughed.
Thank you.
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--- Luigi and randomness had little or no humour for me.
++ The 'classic yellow' was a good pic for the song standalone.
?? Maybe 'lyrics' would be good? You could have a little bouncing ball, so we could sing along...
Frenzy responds:
Lol, thanks! Liked the review and tips. Great, great review!
And here are the lyrics!
On my shirt
A little dot
A yellow spot
I got it from
YELLOW MUSTAAAAAAAAARD!!!11
Song by Frank from the Newgrounds Audio Portal
Thanks again for the great review!
~ Z
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~~REVIEW~~
This was funny also short but i liked it, kinda simple in art but it was neat like that, the humor of it was sorta funny, i just think it needs more content and more scenes, nice flash though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scens and more content, and more humor.
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Funny very short animation but kinda cute with the simple art and all.
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K
^^Good Points^^
I can't believe you found such an odd song in the audio portal. It's really quite interesting and a great choice to make a Flash movie on.
^^Needs Improving^^
Your animating and drawing skills obviously aren't that good, so I felt you didn't do the song much good. The drawings were really plain with no shading or definition at all. I felt a better animator could have really captured the emotion at the end of the song, which you really did not do too well.
Frenzy responds:
Ok, thanks!