Very well done!
I'll start off with graphics...
Graphics were top notch... The use of shading on each character was very well implemented and the colors blended together to make a very stunning visual looking of professional quality such as chluaid (creator of works such as the YuYu and Prowlies at the River). Very well animated with a nice balance of frame by frame and tweening to create a nice, smooth effect. The speech animation was very well done in that there was an actual frame by frame jaw that moved adding more character to the already well drawn character.
Style...
Style had to be a 10 in being that the story was of movie quality, having a introduction of character, a conflict, a rising action, a climax, a falling action, and followed by a resolution. All these combined with a very original plot make this a very professional looking movie and very capable of moving onto a series.
Sound...
Very well done on a library of sounds. The songs selected all fit in with the mood of the scene. The only concern I had with the music was the use of "Elevator Music" by khuskan. Even though the song fit and is very well composed, the song is not fresh in the sense of it being used in 23 submissions as of today... I know this is not a big issue but I feel that the song needs to be less played for a while before it can be used again in a submission to keep it from being overplayed in my opinion.
Violence...
I gave you a 3 just because you had the 2 scenes with the cartrige being flung at the pikman's head and the playstation vendor's head. :-)
Interactivity...
A 10 for great use of menus and an overall good feel to that small click to the scenes and to play the movie. >_<
Humor...
I found this to be decent humor but well placed through out the whole movie. Such as kirby and the bathroom scene and the... husky... lady being picked up off the side of the road.
Overall 10 for a great movie to start off a hopefully great series. I wish you good luck in the creation of new episodes.