the voice over
Despite wonderful animation, good sound and whatnot, I couldn't get into this because of the voiceover. It's a distinct voice, but it sounds robotic. It doesn't flow, sounding like someone reading off a cue card instead of an interview. I've learned that you can have the best story and image, but if the sound is off, it throws everything. Perhaps take a look at how the voice could be done differently, or at least a bit more smoothly. Other than that, it's pretty good.