Love the style, not long enough (duh)
I really like the style in these flashes. I can't quite put my finger on it, it's more subjective than anything.
However, the first one was better. I thought it was funny; this one was merely amusing (until the last hilarious joke, which I WON'T REPEAT HERE BECAUSE THAT WOULD SPOIL IT *hint hint*).
Anyway, there was one thing that REALLY bugged me the whole time. I guess it must be a problem with layers or something, but it looked like the guy was inside the little lookout building, but the pointy thingy on top of his head kept going BEHIND the entire roof. I dunno, it just bugged the crap out of me.
Overall, though, I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work. Also, a response would be cool; maybe I'm just looking at the pointy thingy wrong...